for went away5/14/2008 c1 
19Perfectly Paradox
Jeezles peezles! You've done it again! I love the depth and the very original way you phrase your ideas. It's so intense. I love your writing style. I'm going to go read some more of your stuff. :D
19Perfectly ParadoxJeezles peezles! You've done it again! I love the depth and the very original way you phrase your ideas. It's so intense. I love your writing style. I'm going to go read some more of your stuff. :D
4/10/2007 c1 re x invented
i love the emotion i find in people's writings. it's inspiring. you're inspiring. i'm so glad i started back on this site. i love poetry, it's the sould at its most exposed, human condition at its most tragic. this is no exception.
_till tonight do us part
i love the emotion i find in people's writings. it's inspiring. you're inspiring. i'm so glad i started back on this site. i love poetry, it's the sould at its most exposed, human condition at its most tragic. this is no exception.
_till tonight do us part
4/3/2007 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
It's interesting to me how you never really tell the reader where it is that you've "gone away to" but it's none the less fascinating. I loved the line about being heavier then light - light always seems so weightless, it was a powerful proclomation. A truely unique piece, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietIt's interesting to me how you never really tell the reader where it is that you've "gone away to" but it's none the less fascinating. I loved the line about being heavier then light - light always seems so weightless, it was a powerful proclomation. A truely unique piece, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.
Much love,
Juliet.
4/2/2007 c1 63lackluster
the raw yet subdued effect this has is just shattering. this is brilliant. there's so many ways to interpret it i almost don't want to know the truth. and that last stanza is heartbreakingly gorgeous.
63lacklusterthe raw yet subdued effect this has is just shattering. this is brilliant. there's so many ways to interpret it i almost don't want to know the truth. and that last stanza is heartbreakingly gorgeous.
4/1/2007 c1 recycle rhymes
wow pretty. i like the last stanza. very poignant. nice work...and keep writing.
wow pretty. i like the last stanza. very poignant. nice work...and keep writing.