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7/29/2008 c1 14xhaiiro
I love how the entire poem is formed around a simile; it's a very simple and beautiful effect. Good job.
4/2/2007 c1 63lackluster
this is just sweet. it brings back memories and that just adds more depth to the poem, for me. "purple leaves falling to cracked autumn ground"- lovely imagery.

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