for I'm In Love With A Stripper8/26/2018 c25 serah
the book is so enthralling and ends so nice i really enjoyed it. in fact, i took a day 2 read it. thumbs up!
the book is so enthralling and ends so nice i really enjoyed it. in fact, i took a day 2 read it. thumbs up!
10/21/2014 c4 Tanairy Cornelio
hmm.. I'm pretty sure shawn has a girl in his room, thats why he won't let her in! cheater alert!
hmm.. I'm pretty sure shawn has a girl in his room, thats why he won't let her in! cheater alert!
10/21/2014 c3 Tanairy Cornelio
This story is so cute :) i love when its the other way around where the guy is the shy/nerdy one, and the girl is the outgoing one. Its a nice change from the usual bad boy good girl thing XD
This story is so cute :) i love when its the other way around where the guy is the shy/nerdy one, and the girl is the outgoing one. Its a nice change from the usual bad boy good girl thing XD
8/23/2013 c25 CharlieJuliet
WowWowWow! I absolutely love this story. One of the cutest I've ever read. I particularly love Jean. I'm so used to reading alpha males, he's a breath of fresh air.
WowWowWow! I absolutely love this story. One of the cutest I've ever read. I particularly love Jean. I'm so used to reading alpha males, he's a breath of fresh air.
8/24/2012 c4 Pseudonym59
i love how you're reversing the cliche on this one. :) I do love nerdy guys. Shawn's a cheaterrr.
i love how you're reversing the cliche on this one. :) I do love nerdy guys. Shawn's a cheaterrr.
8/17/2012 c25 larafrancesca
Thank you for sharing your story! :)
Thank you for sharing your story! :)
5/13/2012 c1 
21rosieroo
Hey there! I'm Rosie from a website called A Drop of Romeo and your story has been added to our archive, under the category of Geek and the Hot Guy (Hot girl, in this case!). Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: I was hesitant to try this at first, but now I highly recommend it. It makes for a cute, funny read, where it's the geeky boy and the hot girl. I like how the cliche has been reversed, and the author has pulled that off well. She kept me hooked with totally original situations and didn't let my attention wander for a moment. The characters were beautiful, every one of them, with their own individual personalities. Jean is naive and very sweet while Lilly is much more outgoing and vivacious.
Jean meets Lilly at a strip club (where she works) that he was dragged to by his roommate. He falls for her straightaway and then he starts running into her around the university campus. The chemistry is there from the start and their conversations are interesting and cute. Their relationship didn't feel boring or old as the end got closer. It's so hard to keep it all fresh but AustinDangerPowers (love the name) has pulled it off.
I thought it was very well written with perfect punctuation, which is always a relief. There is a good balance of description with dialogue. There are the odd misspelt words, but other than that she writes very fluently. However, some chapters seem to just cut off mid-conversation so I would suggest rounding them off a bit better. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read that I wouldn't mind reading twice.
21rosierooHey there! I'm Rosie from a website called A Drop of Romeo and your story has been added to our archive, under the category of Geek and the Hot Guy (Hot girl, in this case!). Here's your review:
Rosie Thinks: I was hesitant to try this at first, but now I highly recommend it. It makes for a cute, funny read, where it's the geeky boy and the hot girl. I like how the cliche has been reversed, and the author has pulled that off well. She kept me hooked with totally original situations and didn't let my attention wander for a moment. The characters were beautiful, every one of them, with their own individual personalities. Jean is naive and very sweet while Lilly is much more outgoing and vivacious.
Jean meets Lilly at a strip club (where she works) that he was dragged to by his roommate. He falls for her straightaway and then he starts running into her around the university campus. The chemistry is there from the start and their conversations are interesting and cute. Their relationship didn't feel boring or old as the end got closer. It's so hard to keep it all fresh but AustinDangerPowers (love the name) has pulled it off.
I thought it was very well written with perfect punctuation, which is always a relief. There is a good balance of description with dialogue. There are the odd misspelt words, but other than that she writes very fluently. However, some chapters seem to just cut off mid-conversation so I would suggest rounding them off a bit better. All in all, it was a very enjoyable read that I wouldn't mind reading twice.
2/19/2011 c25 6surprise butt secks
This made me laugh, and even though I've never really enjoyed a story when the boy is naiive and the girl is more experienced since they always dwell upon the fact, this was cute and well written :D
6surprise butt secksThis made me laugh, and even though I've never really enjoyed a story when the boy is naiive and the girl is more experienced since they always dwell upon the fact, this was cute and well written :D
12/20/2010 c19 7gulistala
Just when I thought he was going to be a nice, caring older brother. Patrick is an ass.
7gulistalaJust when I thought he was going to be a nice, caring older brother. Patrick is an ass.
12/20/2010 c14 gulistala
Ah so this is why Jean didn't want Lilly to meet his brother. =D I smell drama!
Ah so this is why Jean didn't want Lilly to meet his brother. =D I smell drama!
9/17/2010 c25 2Hawt Link Girl
Aww what a Great ending!
i love it will there be a second book?
i would be soo great to read
and i love at the end "...and then there was hige shoot out Mr. and Mrs. Smith style"!
Haha the story was awesome, but i give you a Screaming Crowd For the end... :3
2Hawt Link GirlAww what a Great ending!
i love it will there be a second book?
i would be soo great to read
and i love at the end "...and then there was hige shoot out Mr. and Mrs. Smith style"!
Haha the story was awesome, but i give you a Screaming Crowd For the end... :3