
1/8/2008 c8
18found.eventually
aw. i like this story. particularly this chapter, i don't know why. maybe because shawn is FINALLY out of the picture (that cheating bastard), and jean is finally acting more normal. more like a guy. hahahaha. keep it up, okay? i want to see how this ends! -grins-

aw. i like this story. particularly this chapter, i don't know why. maybe because shawn is FINALLY out of the picture (that cheating bastard), and jean is finally acting more normal. more like a guy. hahahaha. keep it up, okay? i want to see how this ends! -grins-
1/5/2008 c8
1storys
Okay, so this is the first time I've been reading it. And I have to say, I loved all 8 chapters of this! So original and so awesomely written and the characters so well portrayed and AWW SO SWEET! Update UPATE Update SOON!

Okay, so this is the first time I've been reading it. And I have to say, I loved all 8 chapters of this! So original and so awesomely written and the characters so well portrayed and AWW SO SWEET! Update UPATE Update SOON!
1/5/2008 c8
4ColdCoffeeEyes25
Love how this stays fluffy and light, how sweet Lilly's character stays ... it's a nice contrast with her hard-edged job. Looking forward to your next update.

Love how this stays fluffy and light, how sweet Lilly's character stays ... it's a nice contrast with her hard-edged job. Looking forward to your next update.
7/2/2007 c4
3pleasebequiet
They're was a whore in his room isn't there. *rolls eyes* I like the concept of the story and how it's moving along. Update soon! =]

They're was a whore in his room isn't there. *rolls eyes* I like the concept of the story and how it's moving along. Update soon! =]
7/2/2007 c4 The Fates03
Cute story.It's really different, that's what is really good about it! you can so tell that Shawn is cheating on Lily. Pretty name as well! Still can't believe she works in a bar.That's cool...Keep updating!
Cute story.It's really different, that's what is really good about it! you can so tell that Shawn is cheating on Lily. Pretty name as well! Still can't believe she works in a bar.That's cool...Keep updating!
4/21/2007 c2
8Panic At The Stress Disorder
That's really good! I love the way Roxy doesn't seem like a slut, which most strippers would. I mean, not the typical person you'd think. And Jeans friends seem pretty cool too!

That's really good! I love the way Roxy doesn't seem like a slut, which most strippers would. I mean, not the typical person you'd think. And Jeans friends seem pretty cool too!