for Forget Easter5/25/2007 c1 
612simpleplan13
I like this a lot... the stream of consciousness in the first stanza is great and I love the ending because its so ambiguous, which is awesome... i also like the line "it's pretty funny" im not sure why i like it so much but i do.. lol
612simpleplan13I like this a lot... the stream of consciousness in the first stanza is great and I love the ending because its so ambiguous, which is awesome... i also like the line "it's pretty funny" im not sure why i like it so much but i do.. lol
5/7/2007 c1 27Airaceir
I love your style! =D and i like your poems. Really i like them alot. And thanks for reviewing Flight. ^^
Smile,
Aira
27AiraceirI love your style! =D and i like your poems. Really i like them alot. And thanks for reviewing Flight. ^^
Smile,
Aira
4/9/2007 c1 A Creature of Literature
I am not quite sure I understand. Perhaps I am not meant to understand the complexities of the mind. I like the form that you used, it is interesting that there arent any capital letters. Your grammar is impeccable.
I am not quite sure I understand. Perhaps I am not meant to understand the complexities of the mind. I like the form that you used, it is interesting that there arent any capital letters. Your grammar is impeccable.