for In a Crowd Alone4/4/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
A very sad piece, but well written. I like the relatable theme and the emotional way you presented it. Great work, keep writing.
A very sad piece, but well written. I like the relatable theme and the emotional way you presented it. Great work, keep writing.
4/4/2007 c1 
14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
i like this a lot, it's really sad. the styling is good. however, i think using some commas would be good and they would help to break it up a little bit more.
14mindOFdeliriousUNRESTi like this a lot, it's really sad. the styling is good. however, i think using some commas would be good and they would help to break it up a little bit more.