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4/30/2007 c1 43Patricia Louise
Interesting structure. I liked it.
4/4/2007 c1 109ADSpencer
*huggles* Beautiful. Sad. I think you captured this emotion well.
4/4/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
A very sad piece, but well written. I like the relatable theme and the emotional way you presented it. Great work, keep writing.
4/4/2007 c1 14mindOFdeliriousUNREST
i like this a lot, it's really sad. the styling is good. however, i think using some commas would be good and they would help to break it up a little bit more.

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