
5/24/2009 c1
2dragonflydreamer
Very beautiful sentiment. It's Strange yet peaceful, just like a dream.
[Lollipop trees spread their limbs/reaching for golden light.]
I love these lines. They create such a nice image.
Nice peace. Short, but it says what it needs to say.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

Very beautiful sentiment. It's Strange yet peaceful, just like a dream.
[Lollipop trees spread their limbs/reaching for golden light.]
I love these lines. They create such a nice image.
Nice peace. Short, but it says what it needs to say.
~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
4/15/2007 c1
2brightlywound93
Good poem. Please dont think im stalking you since I review EVERYTHING you write...Im just a big fan of your work. lol.. I liked this poem. Dreams take us to some great places sometimes, dont they? lol
Kali

Good poem. Please dont think im stalking you since I review EVERYTHING you write...Im just a big fan of your work. lol.. I liked this poem. Dreams take us to some great places sometimes, dont they? lol
Kali
4/4/2007 c1 bipedalcooney
I really like the carefree feel to the last few lines of this piece. Nicely written, with good imagry. Great work and keep writing.
I really like the carefree feel to the last few lines of this piece. Nicely written, with good imagry. Great work and keep writing.