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5/24/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
I love the structure of this poem. It looks great visually, but doesn't sacrifice the content at all. It also creates a strong feeling of the sense of being "burried" that you present at the beginning.

[Forever weeping

Tears of crimson

Self-loathing.]

I loved those lines. The way you give self-loathing a physical state is very creative, particularly in the way you combine it with tears.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
4/15/2007 c1 2brightlywound93
You know those internet ads they have at the bottom of stories? Well, underneath yours there was one for teenage depression, I thought it was ironic considering the subject matter of the poem! Anyways, I loved this. Keep it up!

Kali

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