
6/9/2008 c1
172DefineBeauty
i think this one is your best poem
however, its flow is a little bit off, especially with the 4th stanza. the second line is a little too long, which throws it off since the rest of the poem is shorter than that.
but overall i liked it =] its sweet

i think this one is your best poem
however, its flow is a little bit off, especially with the 4th stanza. the second line is a little too long, which throws it off since the rest of the poem is shorter than that.
but overall i liked it =] its sweet
4/16/2007 c1
146Sexy Vampirechick
Aw...this is soo sweet.What more can she ask for?You're terribly drowning her in your sea of love.

Aw...this is soo sweet.What more can she ask for?You're terribly drowning her in your sea of love.