for Curious2/19/2008 c1 sue d. onym
i liked this poem a lot. reading the dot-dot-dots as pauses bothered me because it slowed the pace down too much, so i ignored them and just enjoyed the physical shape they gave to the poem itself. i hope that's okay?
i liked this poem a lot. reading the dot-dot-dots as pauses bothered me because it slowed the pace down too much, so i ignored them and just enjoyed the physical shape they gave to the poem itself. i hope that's okay?
4/5/2007 c1 
3Wandering Rambler of Insanity
I understand you. I know what you mean in it all. Never knowing if you are or aren't. So many feelings inside screwing around and Effing you up. I know.
I like it. Strong mental pictures, depective too. Its better than most.
3Wandering Rambler of InsanityI understand you. I know what you mean in it all. Never knowing if you are or aren't. So many feelings inside screwing around and Effing you up. I know.
I like it. Strong mental pictures, depective too. Its better than most.