
4/25/2007 c1
65Nemonus
Ooh, nice. I like this, and of course I'm glad that you used my earlier comment for inspiration. The rhythm and formatting work together nicely and your words are pretty good and intense. I like the first line especially.

Ooh, nice. I like this, and of course I'm glad that you used my earlier comment for inspiration. The rhythm and formatting work together nicely and your words are pretty good and intense. I like the first line especially.
4/17/2007 c1
46antigonelives
Great piece! I have this awesome image in my head, thanks to this poem. :)
~Cristina

Great piece! I have this awesome image in my head, thanks to this poem. :)
~Cristina
4/16/2007 c1 crazy cat lady
Well, James, maybe you should check your spelling before you insult someone's story...angles? From what I gathered, she was talking about Angels...there is a difference you know.
Childe, honey, it was a lovely piece...
Later.
Well, James, maybe you should check your spelling before you insult someone's story...angles? From what I gathered, she was talking about Angels...there is a difference you know.
Childe, honey, it was a lovely piece...
Later.
4/10/2007 c1 james
screw you. you dont know a thing about angles.
THEYRE NOT REAL!
retard
screw you. you dont know a thing about angles.
THEYRE NOT REAL!
retard