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5/27/2013 c1 Samson3105
this situation may be in my very near future.
6/24/2011 c1 44Killian I
I like this. The straightforward manner really makes the story strong.
4/13/2007 c1 nef
really nice story. simple. u captured a real moment there.
4/5/2007 c1 R. Madillo
The other review pretty much covered anything I thought was off.

It's cute, without being nauseatingly bubbly. Well-balanced in its elements. I'm glad to see a realistic piece involving the social aspects of being a lesbian.
4/5/2007 c1 1Zure
-I must warn you now that I can come across as very harsh in my reviews. I'm sorry if I unintentionally act like a major jerk in this review. Now that I've warned you I might as well do some hardcore reviewing.-

Okay, maybe not hardcore. soft maybe?

I thought this was pretty funny, it was an amusing read. And it was NOT cliche. yay!

Okay first, sentences that need a second gander.

Missing words:

[“I just worry what your stepfather _do if his only daughter ended up gay,” ]

[I paused and looked up from my yogurt cup and my rollie pollie sister struggling to crawl away from me.] weird sentence.

Second, i like the characters, the mother really comes off as lost and confused. And the daughter is really chill.

actually, it was really funny, but i'm highly sleepy at the moment. i love the pant-suit comment...and the child of divorce thing.

shoot, i was all bent on doing this amazing review. but i could only squeeze out like 1.5 drops of reveiwness. wtv. maybe i'll check back anonymously...later...when i'm awake.

hope this helps a tiny bit.

happy writing.

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