for Never in A Million Years10/22/2011 c22 Guest
Congrats on a job well done. Love it!
Congrats on a job well done. Love it!
9/25/2011 c1 
4Knightmare Elite
This is an interesting start to an interesting story.
If I had one problem, it's the descriptions, they really pause the story. I think the introductions to the main friends could have been more transparent, and the extended description of Angela read more like someone reading off her bullet points before handing her a "person of the year" award, rather than a potential love interest, subtly works wonders.
Other than that, I'm curious to see how events unfold.
4Knightmare EliteThis is an interesting start to an interesting story.
If I had one problem, it's the descriptions, they really pause the story. I think the introductions to the main friends could have been more transparent, and the extended description of Angela read more like someone reading off her bullet points before handing her a "person of the year" award, rather than a potential love interest, subtly works wonders.
Other than that, I'm curious to see how events unfold.
9/10/2011 c21 Firefly's Love and Loyalty
Wait, what?
Did Angela change to Leslie in the end of the last section? What?
Wait, what?
Did Angela change to Leslie in the end of the last section? What?
6/16/2011 c20 tacobby
You've totally sucked me in...I dig the whole getting to see everyone's point of view, to me it helps the story play out better..I can't wait to read more! :-)
You've totally sucked me in...I dig the whole getting to see everyone's point of view, to me it helps the story play out better..I can't wait to read more! :-)
2/14/2011 c19 Anon723723723
I just stumbled upon your story, and I do like it. Your characters are interesting, as well as all of the drama.
If you need a beta, I'll do it for you.
Keep up the good work!
I just stumbled upon your story, and I do like it. Your characters are interesting, as well as all of the drama.
If you need a beta, I'll do it for you.
Keep up the good work!
2/6/2011 c19 11Nowhat
WoW. ...Um, I already forgot her name... Ange... or something like that, had to get a more open mind. And a deeper view of things.
But do update. :)
11NowhatWoW. ...Um, I already forgot her name... Ange... or something like that, had to get a more open mind. And a deeper view of things.
But do update. :)
2/6/2011 c1 1Nowhat
Wait, wait, wait; I have to so review for this. It'll get popular...
But anyways, good start for such a story. Hmm... interesting characters. I hope you do update, at least, until I catch up to the end. I am a fast reader. Ja ne, I really want to continue reading this without interruptions.
Wait, wait, wait; I have to so review for this. It'll get popular...
But anyways, good start for such a story. Hmm... interesting characters. I hope you do update, at least, until I catch up to the end. I am a fast reader. Ja ne, I really want to continue reading this without interruptions.
10/19/2010 c15 Micah7
lol wow. 0_0!
dam...how old are these girls again? :)
Older couples could take notes from this I swear. I can see it now... "Wanna spice up your marriage? Read Never in A Million Years"
lol wow. 0_0!
dam...how old are these girls again? :)
Older couples could take notes from this I swear. I can see it now... "Wanna spice up your marriage? Read Never in A Million Years"
10/18/2010 c5 Micah7
O things got heated at lunch. You know, Jason is smart. Most guys want to add their 10 cents to stuff, but his best deal was staying quiet.
Oh and Miranda's line, "A man who can give me multiple orgasms" was hilarious. Seeing as how thats nearly impossible lol jk
O things got heated at lunch. You know, Jason is smart. Most guys want to add their 10 cents to stuff, but his best deal was staying quiet.
Oh and Miranda's line, "A man who can give me multiple orgasms" was hilarious. Seeing as how thats nearly impossible lol jk
10/18/2010 c4 Micah7
ok ok I loved this chap.
However this "I wanted chocolate, but the cafeteria was out of cookies. I hated PMS" is the story of my life lol as probably every other girl. Right when you NEED chocolate, its NEVER there! :(
ok ok I loved this chap.
However this "I wanted chocolate, but the cafeteria was out of cookies. I hated PMS" is the story of my life lol as probably every other girl. Right when you NEED chocolate, its NEVER there! :(
10/18/2010 c2 Micah7
um, so conversation seems a little iffy at the end?
Its cool tho. Adolescence makes you blurt out random stuff lol
um, so conversation seems a little iffy at the end?
Its cool tho. Adolescence makes you blurt out random stuff lol
10/18/2010 c1 Micah7
Cool and not so cliche! :)
I hate losing contact with good friends. Anyway, I liked this first chapter. partially b/c I could connect to alot of issues. Didn't have any bisexual pals. But I'm sure Jason is lots of fun.
Cool and not so cliche! :)
I hate losing contact with good friends. Anyway, I liked this first chapter. partially b/c I could connect to alot of issues. Didn't have any bisexual pals. But I'm sure Jason is lots of fun.