for Never in A Million Years10/10/2010 c18 
7gaia-x-goddess
That's sweet, that she's helping her get over her homophobia (Y) sometimes, only friends can change people's attitudes like that...
7gaia-x-goddessThat's sweet, that she's helping her get over her homophobia (Y) sometimes, only friends can change people's attitudes like that...
10/9/2010 c1 1WolfmanSam
I liked it, then gain i'm not much of a writer but i love to read, it seams well written but perhaps you could change how she introduces her friends, its just a thought.
1WolfmanSamI liked it, then gain i'm not much of a writer but i love to read, it seams well written but perhaps you could change how she introduces her friends, its just a thought.
7/25/2010 c17 9jquackers
Don't like that Richard guy. At all. Jeff is awesome for cheering Leslie on.
The fuss, Tina, is that you can't just tolerate them. You don't have to support them. Just accept them for who they are, and if you can't, then you can't, because they can't change it, no matter how much they may want to. I agree with Leslie for the most part; I just think she crossed the line a bit when she said she hopes Tina will have a horrible life.
Ugh, Angela.. PLEASE. I really did think she might've changed, but when she started with the whole teenagers/shouldn't be in serious relationships/something that didn't even have anything to do with you.. No. Come on. It has EVERYTHING to do with her. True, it's in the past, but it's still part of Angela.. So I mean.. Ugh.
-dies- I want to bitchslap Angela SO much right now. She's freaking pissing everyone off. I wish she'd set aside her pride and selfishness, and just listen to the other side of the story(ies).
Well, really dramatic, interesting chapter. You could work on detail, though. Add more description in their actions to make it more realistic, and less blunt, less empty. It'll be a lot more emotional, too. But good job. Looking forward to the next update.
9jquackersDon't like that Richard guy. At all. Jeff is awesome for cheering Leslie on.
The fuss, Tina, is that you can't just tolerate them. You don't have to support them. Just accept them for who they are, and if you can't, then you can't, because they can't change it, no matter how much they may want to. I agree with Leslie for the most part; I just think she crossed the line a bit when she said she hopes Tina will have a horrible life.
Ugh, Angela.. PLEASE. I really did think she might've changed, but when she started with the whole teenagers/shouldn't be in serious relationships/something that didn't even have anything to do with you.. No. Come on. It has EVERYTHING to do with her. True, it's in the past, but it's still part of Angela.. So I mean.. Ugh.
-dies- I want to bitchslap Angela SO much right now. She's freaking pissing everyone off. I wish she'd set aside her pride and selfishness, and just listen to the other side of the story(ies).
Well, really dramatic, interesting chapter. You could work on detail, though. Add more description in their actions to make it more realistic, and less blunt, less empty. It'll be a lot more emotional, too. But good job. Looking forward to the next update.
7/19/2010 c16 jquackers
Interesting thing going on between Maria and Leslie. I'm getting the feeling Maria might actually have some sort of feelings for her, despite her constantly denying it. And I'm curious to see how the whole Angela thing will play out. What if it does end up like her and Leslie's relationship?
Thanks for the update. Don't worry too much about getting another one out.. Just take your time. [:
Interesting thing going on between Maria and Leslie. I'm getting the feeling Maria might actually have some sort of feelings for her, despite her constantly denying it. And I'm curious to see how the whole Angela thing will play out. What if it does end up like her and Leslie's relationship?
Thanks for the update. Don't worry too much about getting another one out.. Just take your time. [:
7/19/2010 c15 jquackers
Oh, man. I was scared for a second. I thought her dad would be way more pissed than that. It seems he's more angry at her not telling him, rather than them going out. Hahah, he's cool. Her mom, on the other hand.. Well, I can't really say anything about her, considering this is basically her first influential mention. Sucks that she couldn't accept it, though.
Oh, man. I was scared for a second. I thought her dad would be way more pissed than that. It seems he's more angry at her not telling him, rather than them going out. Hahah, he's cool. Her mom, on the other hand.. Well, I can't really say anything about her, considering this is basically her first influential mention. Sucks that she couldn't accept it, though.
7/19/2010 c14 jquackers
For a while, I forgot Maria was living with Angela. Something always has to interrupt these sorts of scenes. x:
Oh, whoa! Plot twist! I really did think Jason and Maria slept together. But her and Leslie? Didn't really see that coming.
For a while, I forgot Maria was living with Angela. Something always has to interrupt these sorts of scenes. x:
Oh, whoa! Plot twist! I really did think Jason and Maria slept together. But her and Leslie? Didn't really see that coming.
7/19/2010 c13 jquackers
LOL. I love how Miranda has a tendency to moan whenever she's enjoying something. It's so hilarious. First, the foot massage, now eating chicken. LOL.
You sure like cliffhangers, don't you? I'm just glad I don't have to wait for an update right now. LOL.
LOL. I love how Miranda has a tendency to moan whenever she's enjoying something. It's so hilarious. First, the foot massage, now eating chicken. LOL.
You sure like cliffhangers, don't you? I'm just glad I don't have to wait for an update right now. LOL.
7/19/2010 c12 jquackers
Man, I didn't realize this was updated so many times since the last time I checked this. I reread the entire thing up to this point, just to refresh my memory. And damn, these girls are so.. bitchy. Stereotypical teenage girls.
LOL. I think Angela kneeling on the ground on one knee is pretty eye-attracting already. A kiss probably wouldn't have hurt much, but I understand how Miranda feels.
Man, I didn't realize this was updated so many times since the last time I checked this. I reread the entire thing up to this point, just to refresh my memory. And damn, these girls are so.. bitchy. Stereotypical teenage girls.
LOL. I think Angela kneeling on the ground on one knee is pretty eye-attracting already. A kiss probably wouldn't have hurt much, but I understand how Miranda feels.
7/18/2010 c16 19zutAra101
Love this chap.
Maria so likes Leslie it's not funny.
Update when you can please.
-Z
19zutAra101Love this chap.
Maria so likes Leslie it's not funny.
Update when you can please.
-Z
7/18/2010 c16 Hali2010
aw poor maria, i hope she figures it out soon. cool story, great chapter and i'm looking forward to the next one XD!
aw poor maria, i hope she figures it out soon. cool story, great chapter and i'm looking forward to the next one XD!
4/14/2010 c15 7gaia-x-goddess
I just found this :D It's god. I like.
Mind you, my mum almost walked in on me reading it. Specifically, a sex scene.
...yeah.
7gaia-x-goddessI just found this :D It's god. I like.
Mind you, my mum almost walked in on me reading it. Specifically, a sex scene.
...yeah.
2/8/2010 c14 2vanilla.barcode
One of few stories that i think are actually hot. The chapters are a little short but still great. Hope the next chapter is on the way, and hopefully a little longer.
Keep up the good work.
2vanilla.barcodeOne of few stories that i think are actually hot. The chapters are a little short but still great. Hope the next chapter is on the way, and hopefully a little longer.
Keep up the good work.
12/27/2009 c13 Hali2010
this is an amazing story one of the best i've read on this site! please, please, please write more!
this is an amazing story one of the best i've read on this site! please, please, please write more!
10/8/2009 c13 4Xenn.be.Twisted
Okay. I'll it on thick then: I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS AMAZING.
PLEASE, write more,
I'm waiting!
Xenn
4Xenn.be.TwistedOkay. I'll it on thick then: I LOVE THIS STORY. IT IS AMAZING.
PLEASE, write more,
I'm waiting!
Xenn