8/31/2009 c12 YukinoKara
This is a very entertaining story so far! I'm really enjoying reading it :)
I find it very interesting. You're doing a good job with it so far.
Good luck with writing the next chapter, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
This is a very entertaining story so far! I'm really enjoying reading it :)
I find it very interesting. You're doing a good job with it so far.
Good luck with writing the next chapter, and I look forward to it!
~YukinoKara
7/4/2009 c11 9jquackers
Ah, jeez.. So much drama. Too much, but it's what makes the story more interesting, so I'm fine with it. -laughs- I really do hope you didn't give up on this, 'cause I love this story. It's got potential. And besides, you write extremely hot make-out scenes. More, please? :D
But yeah, thanks for the great read. Hope you update.
Ah, jeez.. So much drama. Too much, but it's what makes the story more interesting, so I'm fine with it. -laughs- I really do hope you didn't give up on this, 'cause I love this story. It's got potential. And besides, you write extremely hot make-out scenes. More, please? :D
But yeah, thanks for the great read. Hope you update.
7/4/2009 c10 jquackers
I get this feeling Leslie likes Angela or something. Okay, well, I didn't expect to be right. O_O. Jeez, that was unexpected, though. Leslie probably would tell, though, just to spite Miranda.
But anyway.. Onto the next chapter! Must.. find.. out..
I get this feeling Leslie likes Angela or something. Okay, well, I didn't expect to be right. O_O. Jeez, that was unexpected, though. Leslie probably would tell, though, just to spite Miranda.
But anyway.. Onto the next chapter! Must.. find.. out..
7/4/2009 c9 jquackers
Woo, more making out between them two. -laughs- Just the thought of it is hot.
But that really sucks for Maria. I'm just glad Angela's there for her; she's a great person, really.
Woo, more making out between them two. -laughs- Just the thought of it is hot.
But that really sucks for Maria. I'm just glad Angela's there for her; she's a great person, really.
7/4/2009 c8 jquackers
WOO, go Angela! She rocks. So much.
WO! GO MIRANDDA. Hell yeah, they're in a relationship! :D
And dang, you DO write really good make-out scenes.
WOO, go Angela! She rocks. So much.
WO! GO MIRANDDA. Hell yeah, they're in a relationship! :D
And dang, you DO write really good make-out scenes.
7/4/2009 c7 jquackers
I totally agree with that priest there, even though I'm not really religious. It's something that can convince those who are, though, and it's true.
Aww, a kiss on the cheek. xP
I totally agree with that priest there, even though I'm not really religious. It's something that can convince those who are, though, and it's true.
Aww, a kiss on the cheek. xP
7/4/2009 c6 jquackers
Lool, I like that scene with Maria and Miranda. It was nice. Really playful and humorous.
And the peace lasted for only a few seconds.
Lool, I like that scene with Maria and Miranda. It was nice. Really playful and humorous.
And the peace lasted for only a few seconds.
7/4/2009 c4 jquackers
LOL. Her dad does sound really cool. I like him already.
But jeez, that was just plain unreasonable. She should've listened.
LOL. Her dad does sound really cool. I like him already.
But jeez, that was just plain unreasonable. She should've listened.
7/4/2009 c3 jquackers
LOL. The dancing scene was hilarious, with the guys and all.
Oh boy. I have a feeling the next chapter is gonna be insane.
LOL. The dancing scene was hilarious, with the guys and all.
Oh boy. I have a feeling the next chapter is gonna be insane.
7/4/2009 c2 jquackers
-wiggles eyebrows- A wink, huh? -grins-
Lool. Jason is funny. I like his gaydar. LOL.
Maria's nice, even though she's like.. boy-crazy and so on.
Yep, I like Angela. Something about her seems a bit fake, though.. I don't know why. It's just a weird feeling I get from her, but it's probably just my oddness kickin' in. -laughs-
-wiggles eyebrows- A wink, huh? -grins-
Lool. Jason is funny. I like his gaydar. LOL.
Maria's nice, even though she's like.. boy-crazy and so on.
Yep, I like Angela. Something about her seems a bit fake, though.. I don't know why. It's just a weird feeling I get from her, but it's probably just my oddness kickin' in. -laughs-
7/3/2009 c1 jquackers
Rofl. The thing with the freshman was mean, but neh.
I like Angela, though. She seems like a really cool person (even though she's barely even in this chapter..). But yeah, she seems pretty carefree and stuff.
Rofl. The thing with the freshman was mean, but neh.
I like Angela, though. She seems like a really cool person (even though she's barely even in this chapter..). But yeah, she seems pretty carefree and stuff.
11/11/2008 c1 1T.I Williams
Wow! This is real good. I mean the first sentence pulled me in like the Matrix. You is good. Keep it coming!
Wow! This is real good. I mean the first sentence pulled me in like the Matrix. You is good. Keep it coming!
8/3/2008 c10 Omok
oh my XDD never realized you updated till today =O and omg, you have amazingly fast (sarcastic) update rate ~.~ lol.
oh my XDD never realized you updated till today =O and omg, you have amazingly fast (sarcastic) update rate ~.~ lol.