4/13/2007 c2 PrettyAwkward
Good chapter, they're both getting closer, little by little. Its good. Update soon.
Good chapter, they're both getting closer, little by little. Its good. Update soon.
4/8/2007 c1 PrettyAwkward
It was good, really like how its going to far. From the summary sounds like its going to be a good story. update soon.
It was good, really like how its going to far. From the summary sounds like its going to be a good story. update soon.
4/6/2007 c1 1Mynock Spit
Nice job. Well written so far, but as I always say, you can't judge a book by the first ten pages, so keep going.
Nice job. Well written so far, but as I always say, you can't judge a book by the first ten pages, so keep going.