
4/7/2007 c1
20Rugged Hamster
I'm somewhat lukewarm on the structure (simplicity/repetition) of the poem; didn't really draw me in. I understand that it's stylistic, though, and must just not be my style.

I'm somewhat lukewarm on the structure (simplicity/repetition) of the poem; didn't really draw me in. I understand that it's stylistic, though, and must just not be my style.
4/7/2007 c1
21wecouldgoandget40s
Wow, this poem really had some meaning to it. I quite enjoyed reading it; it was a nice little read. Good job! This was really good. Thank you for posting something as good as this.

Wow, this poem really had some meaning to it. I quite enjoyed reading it; it was a nice little read. Good job! This was really good. Thank you for posting something as good as this.
4/7/2007 c1
37TaltushMeiMei
There's something very nice and comforting about this poem. I really like it. I like how there's the part where things rhyme even though the rest of the poem is in free verse. It's done really nicely. Good job.

There's something very nice and comforting about this poem. I really like it. I like how there's the part where things rhyme even though the rest of the poem is in free verse. It's done really nicely. Good job.