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4/7/2007 c1 20Rugged Hamster
I'm somewhat lukewarm on the structure (simplicity/repetition) of the poem; didn't really draw me in. I understand that it's stylistic, though, and must just not be my style.
4/7/2007 c1 21wecouldgoandget40s
Wow, this poem really had some meaning to it. I quite enjoyed reading it; it was a nice little read. Good job! This was really good. Thank you for posting something as good as this.
4/7/2007 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
There's something very nice and comforting about this poem. I really like it. I like how there's the part where things rhyme even though the rest of the poem is in free verse. It's done really nicely. Good job.
4/7/2007 c1 11FeralEyes
I really really really like this :] Sometimes you just can't help but let life pull you under no matter how hard you try to stay afloat. Very good writing.

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