9/24/2007 c1 4GawjuzDudette
its really good. Just in my opinion, is it possible you can put what your idea of the poem is after the poem? because since i know what its supposed to be, i cant get my own idea on it lol. so the entire time I'm thinking that its based on the past, so it doesnt give the poem the flow it needs. just me...im weird...but i do like it off of that...so...yeah...lol