for What are we doing to the children?4/6/2011 c1 
5TheLovelessRose
Makes wonderful sense, and simply captures what i have been thinking ^.^ I love it.
5TheLovelessRoseMakes wonderful sense, and simply captures what i have been thinking ^.^ I love it.
6/23/2007 c1 19Le Cosmonaute
What a great message. The repetition was good, and it's all so true. It has a nice rhythm. It's sad, what we are doing. Makes you wonder what the wrold will be like later on... Well, good poem.
19Le CosmonauteWhat a great message. The repetition was good, and it's all so true. It has a nice rhythm. It's sad, what we are doing. Makes you wonder what the wrold will be like later on... Well, good poem.
4/12/2007 c1 196relying on youth
I thought is was kind of bad. It didn't flow, and the topic wasn't strong enough. And to the fact, that is a real society, we are by nature reckless murderous animals, and what children do is not in resemblance of their parents, but out of natural animal instinct.
196relying on youthI thought is was kind of bad. It didn't flow, and the topic wasn't strong enough. And to the fact, that is a real society, we are by nature reckless murderous animals, and what children do is not in resemblance of their parents, but out of natural animal instinct.