for Hazel Eyes10/6/2011 c4 
2akaCHEEKS
I did not even realize that you re-wrote this story. I'm going to have to read the whole thing over again to refresh my memory. Otherwise, I only know the general gist of it and was waiting for an update on the sequel. Nevertheless, I need to review and get the review to show up on my review history to remember to read this story again. Haha, I'm looking forward to the new changes!
2akaCHEEKSI did not even realize that you re-wrote this story. I'm going to have to read the whole thing over again to refresh my memory. Otherwise, I only know the general gist of it and was waiting for an update on the sequel. Nevertheless, I need to review and get the review to show up on my review history to remember to read this story again. Haha, I'm looking forward to the new changes!
9/19/2011 c26 All-the-names-are-gone
Wow, great story. It's very descriptive And has a great plot. A quick tip though. Take a little break frome righting, because when you quote your own story on accendent, you know that you've been writing a little bit too much ^-^ .Anyway great story!
Wow, great story. It's very descriptive And has a great plot. A quick tip though. Take a little break frome righting, because when you quote your own story on accendent, you know that you've been writing a little bit too much ^-^ .Anyway great story!
8/4/2010 c25 3Fee18
Wow, great story. I even choked up a bit at the ending. So shoot me, I'm a bit hormonal. lol
Great story
Fee
3Fee18Wow, great story. I even choked up a bit at the ending. So shoot me, I'm a bit hormonal. lol
Great story
Fee
8/3/2010 c11 Fee18
great story so far, but I noticed in this chapter a few minor details that were a bit annoying. First of all, a fracture and a break are the same thing. and it's a plunger for a needle not a filter. I'm a nurse so these minor details are infuriating. But no offence ment. I really like the story so far.
great story so far, but I noticed in this chapter a few minor details that were a bit annoying. First of all, a fracture and a break are the same thing. and it's a plunger for a needle not a filter. I'm a nurse so these minor details are infuriating. But no offence ment. I really like the story so far.
6/2/2010 c25 AkumasTenshi
Love this story to pieces! Just finished reading it and can't wait to read the sequel for it. There were a few times when I got confused, though. Did you realize that you seem to jump from one thing to something completely different between chapters 8 and 9? Maybe you forgot to post a chapter in between...? Also, in chapter 7 you have Tessa telling Skye that she can't smoke because she has diabetes yet later on you have it to where Skye doesn't know and Dean has to tell her at a later chapter.
Still love the story, though. Love how it ended, too, though now I really want to read the sequel which I have already mentioned x)
Love this story to pieces! Just finished reading it and can't wait to read the sequel for it. There were a few times when I got confused, though. Did you realize that you seem to jump from one thing to something completely different between chapters 8 and 9? Maybe you forgot to post a chapter in between...? Also, in chapter 7 you have Tessa telling Skye that she can't smoke because she has diabetes yet later on you have it to where Skye doesn't know and Dean has to tell her at a later chapter.
Still love the story, though. Love how it ended, too, though now I really want to read the sequel which I have already mentioned x)
4/18/2010 c26 8FlamingInk57
You don't know how happy I am now. I thought that you might have given up becasue on the end of chap 25, you said you were posting tonight. Anyways, I agree with some of the thingd you said but I still think this story was amazing,after you finish editing, i may even read this story again. I can't wait for Dean and Colt to come back, because if it ended like this, it would annoy me. In the next book you should do some of the things you said, like Tessa's and Skye's bonding. And explore Colt's and Skye relationship more. I can't wait for the next book. Hope your knee is okay. UPDATE SOON!
8FlamingInk57You don't know how happy I am now. I thought that you might have given up becasue on the end of chap 25, you said you were posting tonight. Anyways, I agree with some of the thingd you said but I still think this story was amazing,after you finish editing, i may even read this story again. I can't wait for Dean and Colt to come back, because if it ended like this, it would annoy me. In the next book you should do some of the things you said, like Tessa's and Skye's bonding. And explore Colt's and Skye relationship more. I can't wait for the next book. Hope your knee is okay. UPDATE SOON!
4/16/2010 c25 8FlamingInk57
The was one of the most awesomest story ever. Amazingly written dude. I love the great escape and it fitted perfectly when I was reading it. When is the next book gonna come out, please tell me you're still doing it.
8FlamingInk57The was one of the most awesomest story ever. Amazingly written dude. I love the great escape and it fitted perfectly when I was reading it. When is the next book gonna come out, please tell me you're still doing it.
11/15/2009 c25 3midnightsecrets
omj, I cried when I read this can you please make a sequal where they all meet up again
3midnightsecretsomj, I cried when I read this can you please make a sequal where they all meet up again