
6/12/2007 c1 x account closed x
you.. you don't know how long i've just sat here, staring at this damn review box trying to come up with words... you have the aility to capture and describe things amazingly, and in such detail that those of us intheknow are left breathless, and those who can't even phathom, are still left silent. it's beautiful caitlin. i really hope things are better since then though.
you.. you don't know how long i've just sat here, staring at this damn review box trying to come up with words... you have the aility to capture and describe things amazingly, and in such detail that those of us intheknow are left breathless, and those who can't even phathom, are still left silent. it's beautiful caitlin. i really hope things are better since then though.
6/11/2007 c1
72angel953
this is absolutely amazing! gosh i havent said that to u in a WHILE...listening to some odd music right now **sings along** so i am kinda hyper writing this...review me!plz
bye bye now from ur bud u know who!

this is absolutely amazing! gosh i havent said that to u in a WHILE...listening to some odd music right now **sings along** so i am kinda hyper writing this...review me!plz
bye bye now from ur bud u know who!
5/8/2007 c1
113Travis C. Eckert
Seems like no hope in this. Good job, yet scary. I have some stories/essays up. Not much anything of poetry up, might have some during summer/coming weeks. I know I have been saying this but finals are coming up.

Seems like no hope in this. Good job, yet scary. I have some stories/essays up. Not much anything of poetry up, might have some during summer/coming weeks. I know I have been saying this but finals are coming up.
4/11/2007 c1
94shookierewrites
Chilling, but I think everyone's felt like that before. Good job!
-ShookieInLove, formerly known as Shookie Smiles Sweetly

Chilling, but I think everyone's felt like that before. Good job!
-ShookieInLove, formerly known as Shookie Smiles Sweetly
4/9/2007 c1
32C. Patrick Ostiguy
I can identify with this poem a lot, particularly the end, but it sort of uses too common devices, not subtle or cryptic enough for my tastes. Too straightforward.

I can identify with this poem a lot, particularly the end, but it sort of uses too common devices, not subtle or cryptic enough for my tastes. Too straightforward.