for The Sky Cries Too6/12/2007 c1 x account closed x
it's absolutely haunting. devastation, breakdowns and everykind of discontent. it's just amazing [will i ever think of a better word?]
it's absolutely haunting. devastation, breakdowns and everykind of discontent. it's just amazing [will i ever think of a better word?]
6/11/2007 c1 
72angel953
now thats not true! i came back, after a few months but i did! see u have friends like me, melissa, tyler *smirks mischievously*, uh...kate, lots of other people who i cant remember their names... um amy, matt...anyways great poem. your writing has really developed and matured since back in 5th grade when i was better than you. not true anymore! your writing has really improved and i wish that i had ur claim to fame with this writing. you should look into getting it published if u can. i bet there are tons of people who would love to publish this...one question...what would u call yourself? anyways ttyl bye bye :)
72angel953now thats not true! i came back, after a few months but i did! see u have friends like me, melissa, tyler *smirks mischievously*, uh...kate, lots of other people who i cant remember their names... um amy, matt...anyways great poem. your writing has really developed and matured since back in 5th grade when i was better than you. not true anymore! your writing has really improved and i wish that i had ur claim to fame with this writing. you should look into getting it published if u can. i bet there are tons of people who would love to publish this...one question...what would u call yourself? anyways ttyl bye bye :)
5/2/2007 c1 113Travis C. Eckert
Very good metaphor at the end with a good tie to the title. Good job, seek some help.
113Travis C. EckertVery good metaphor at the end with a good tie to the title. Good job, seek some help.
4/19/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
"I scream & the thunder shakes the earth" - that line is so powerful, it almost knocked me off my seat! Amazing work, really amazingly well written. *claps*, write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57"I scream & the thunder shakes the earth" - that line is so powerful, it almost knocked me off my seat! Amazing work, really amazingly well written. *claps*, write on!
~Anna~ ^_^