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4/9/2007 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
awh, I like the sense of innocent pain you give in this. The encouragement of hope and the like isn't found very often at all anymore. The admittance of unescapable pain mixed in with the tone of an older sibling is nice! somehow i read all that... anyways, I especially liked the phrase "every heart is breaking" it brought alot of character and edge of realization to it. Great job! keep writing.

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