for Dark Blue4/26/2007 c2 OoohLookACat
well
that definitely isn't what i expected!
lol
good and i so can't wait for more
interesting addition to the plotline
little brody is cute!
haha
izzie
well
that definitely isn't what i expected!
lol
good and i so can't wait for more
interesting addition to the plotline
little brody is cute!
haha
izzie
4/25/2007 c2 
20WriterRose
It wasn't a bad chapter at all. I really liked the banter at the supermarket. Have you ever read This Lullaby by Sarah Dessen? Braedon reminds me of Dexter. I'm a little confused about all the people living in the house? How many are there and how old again? Good chapter and I absolutely want to read the story that you don't want to post. so POST!
;D
20WriterRoseIt wasn't a bad chapter at all. I really liked the banter at the supermarket. Have you ever read This Lullaby by Sarah Dessen? Braedon reminds me of Dexter. I'm a little confused about all the people living in the house? How many are there and how old again? Good chapter and I absolutely want to read the story that you don't want to post. so POST!
;D
4/24/2007 c2 pop-yur-fcukn-collar
O, awesome chapter. I love grocery shopping. I make my Dad buy all the things we don't need. Lol. I like Braedon and I think we've only met him a few times. But, oh well. You gotta love the hot main male character. Edie does definitely remind me of my friend. 2nd chapter confirmed it. :P. Lol. Oh, and btw, i love the song take it away. Never danced to it but I have sung loudly to it. That's fun. Can't wait for next update!
O, awesome chapter. I love grocery shopping. I make my Dad buy all the things we don't need. Lol. I like Braedon and I think we've only met him a few times. But, oh well. You gotta love the hot main male character. Edie does definitely remind me of my friend. 2nd chapter confirmed it. :P. Lol. Oh, and btw, i love the song take it away. Never danced to it but I have sung loudly to it. That's fun. Can't wait for next update!
4/24/2007 c1 1moonlight-requiem
OH MY GOD I LOVE THAT SONG.
I have, I have you breathing down my neck.
I LOVE YOU! hahahahaha
1moonlight-requiemOH MY GOD I LOVE THAT SONG.
I have, I have you breathing down my neck.
I LOVE YOU! hahahahaha
4/24/2007 c2 ryror0x
hey !this chpter isnt short and sucky! i really liked it. its perty funny :) PLEZE update into dust. im like, in luv with that story. must know what HAPPENS! yay. did i give u ur first review? that would be so freakin awesome :D UPDATE and i will REVIEW!
hey !this chpter isnt short and sucky! i really liked it. its perty funny :) PLEZE update into dust. im like, in luv with that story. must know what HAPPENS! yay. did i give u ur first review? that would be so freakin awesome :D UPDATE and i will REVIEW!
4/24/2007 c2 6givelifeyurall
wel...its still better than nothing, i'm happy that you even wrote a chapter! braedon...hm very chill, so you do surf too?
6givelifeyurallwel...its still better than nothing, i'm happy that you even wrote a chapter! braedon...hm very chill, so you do surf too?
4/23/2007 c1 ryror0x
ohh, me likees. tho waves lke that are really only in like, malibu or santa clara or santa cruz. up north, theres like, nothing. great start to a new story!
ohh, me likees. tho waves lke that are really only in like, malibu or santa clara or santa cruz. up north, theres like, nothing. great start to a new story!
4/21/2007 c1 givelifeyurall
omagahh! you gotta write more on this, very fun start. i wish i could surf and relax everyday, lucky girl.
omagahh! you gotta write more on this, very fun start. i wish i could surf and relax everyday, lucky girl.
4/20/2007 c1 pop-yur-fcukn-collar
Wow. Awesome story. Edie really reminds me of a friend of mine. Lol. I think it was a good introduction of the characters. Haha, I'm already likin her friend Charlie. Seems like a cool guy.
Wow. Awesome story. Edie really reminds me of a friend of mine. Lol. I think it was a good introduction of the characters. Haha, I'm already likin her friend Charlie. Seems like a cool guy.
4/14/2007 c1 6Gakuhaitsu
Dark blue seems like it's gonna be really cool! Can't wait for more! Go dark blue and Echo!
6GakuhaitsuDark blue seems like it's gonna be really cool! Can't wait for more! Go dark blue and Echo!
4/12/2007 c1 2Le Tourbillon De La Vie
This story has Major potential!
but the main character Edie kinda seems too
perfect in this first chapter, like nothing's
going to hold her back..
idk
Will keep reading though ^^
.. seeing as how i can not stay away from your
other story! Hahha
2Le Tourbillon De La VieThis story has Major potential!
but the main character Edie kinda seems too
perfect in this first chapter, like nothing's
going to hold her back..
idk
Will keep reading though ^^
.. seeing as how i can not stay away from your
other story! Hahha
4/11/2007 c1 2howfreakingflash
I like this story. It definitely has this laidback vibe, but it's totally pulling me in. Keep it up!
2howfreakingflashI like this story. It definitely has this laidback vibe, but it's totally pulling me in. Keep it up!