for Dark Blue4/10/2007 c1 
4soccerbabe16
love it! i hope you post pics of the characters... i hope that you update this one as regularly as echo though, cause it is awesome!
4soccerbabe16love it! i hope you post pics of the characters... i hope that you update this one as regularly as echo though, cause it is awesome!
4/10/2007 c1 OoohLookACat
its funny how
i don't surf
never surfed in my life
(go to the beach, cause i am australian and we can't survive without the beach)
but i have never surfed
and i understood every bit of surfy lingo.
strange indeed
and this story is interesting.
wondering where it's going though.
assuming it has something to do with this band boy?
it always does
hehehehe
and what a way to come up with a new story.
eating fries with the boyfriend, looking at a magazine and a cd cover and a cousin.
strange but interesting
i shall look out for more!
huzzah
see i told you i would read it =)
izzie
its funny how
i don't surf
never surfed in my life
(go to the beach, cause i am australian and we can't survive without the beach)
but i have never surfed
and i understood every bit of surfy lingo.
strange indeed
and this story is interesting.
wondering where it's going though.
assuming it has something to do with this band boy?
it always does
hehehehe
and what a way to come up with a new story.
eating fries with the boyfriend, looking at a magazine and a cd cover and a cousin.
strange but interesting
i shall look out for more!
huzzah
see i told you i would read it =)
izzie
4/10/2007 c1 dazedandconfused10
i love this story too. man i wish i could write anyway enough about me. keep writing
i love this story too. man i wish i could write anyway enough about me. keep writing
4/10/2007 c1 8somuchformyhappyending
great first chapter. I love how your character is so different from the one in your other story. it's hard to do that.
bec
8somuchformyhappyendinggreat first chapter. I love how your character is so different from the one in your other story. it's hard to do that.
bec
4/10/2007 c1 20WriterRose
It was really good, I liked how descriptive the beginning was, but don't you mean 12am? because 12pm is afternoon. oh and there are three people there, not just two. Just minor grammatical stuff is all, otherwise awesome. I really like the paragraph when they pop the top off their Cokes, it was poetic. I really like Edie's personality already except for the flirty i-can-have-all-the-boys-wrapped-around-my-finger thing, but that's because I can't do that so I'm just jealous (of someone who doesn't exist, wow, pathetic) ;)
Damn though, now I like this story and have one more thing to wait for you to update! :D
20WriterRoseIt was really good, I liked how descriptive the beginning was, but don't you mean 12am? because 12pm is afternoon. oh and there are three people there, not just two. Just minor grammatical stuff is all, otherwise awesome. I really like the paragraph when they pop the top off their Cokes, it was poetic. I really like Edie's personality already except for the flirty i-can-have-all-the-boys-wrapped-around-my-finger thing, but that's because I can't do that so I'm just jealous (of someone who doesn't exist, wow, pathetic) ;)
Damn though, now I like this story and have one more thing to wait for you to update! :D