for Without You4/14/2007 c1 
13pupdawg66
This is officially the first poem I've read here! I'm new to FictionPress (though I have an account at FanFiction, so this process isn't new at all).
I have to say that this poem is really, really good. I myself am a writer and poet- not that I'm great or anything- and poetry is a fairly new thing for me. I only write when I feel inspired or something has happened that lifts me up to the clouds and carries my soul through to the heavens... :) The fact that you wrote this at one in the morning makes me feel less like a loner! Sometimes I'll be up at my computer and typing something up at two or three in the morning, and I won't stop 'til I've got it all out 'cause I know I'll probably forget it by the time I wake up after sleeping for a few hours. I'm sad to hear that you're friend is sick- a best friend, at that. I have a few very good friends that I hold dear to me, and I know that if I learned that one of them had suddenly gotten some life-threatening illness, I would be devastated- and I'd start to write. It gets all my feelings out on paper so I can look back on that moment and know what I was going through or what I believed someone else was going through at that time. You and your friend have my prayers! And again, that poem was amazing. Truly inspiring. A brilliant piece of work for the very first I've read here at FP.
Keep writing and putting your heart and soul into it!
~pupdawg66~
13pupdawg66This is officially the first poem I've read here! I'm new to FictionPress (though I have an account at FanFiction, so this process isn't new at all).
I have to say that this poem is really, really good. I myself am a writer and poet- not that I'm great or anything- and poetry is a fairly new thing for me. I only write when I feel inspired or something has happened that lifts me up to the clouds and carries my soul through to the heavens... :) The fact that you wrote this at one in the morning makes me feel less like a loner! Sometimes I'll be up at my computer and typing something up at two or three in the morning, and I won't stop 'til I've got it all out 'cause I know I'll probably forget it by the time I wake up after sleeping for a few hours. I'm sad to hear that you're friend is sick- a best friend, at that. I have a few very good friends that I hold dear to me, and I know that if I learned that one of them had suddenly gotten some life-threatening illness, I would be devastated- and I'd start to write. It gets all my feelings out on paper so I can look back on that moment and know what I was going through or what I believed someone else was going through at that time. You and your friend have my prayers! And again, that poem was amazing. Truly inspiring. A brilliant piece of work for the very first I've read here at FP.
Keep writing and putting your heart and soul into it!
~pupdawg66~
4/13/2007 c1 8Sophia Victoria
Wow, it's nice and well-written, especially if the theme of the poem is touching. That's nice. Don't worry, my best friend and I are also going through the same phase.
x/Dark Snow Angel/x
8Sophia VictoriaWow, it's nice and well-written, especially if the theme of the poem is touching. That's nice. Don't worry, my best friend and I are also going through the same phase.
x/Dark Snow Angel/x
4/13/2007 c1 11PocoSnow15
Like it? I loved it. I almost started crying reading this. I'm so sorry. I know what it's like to have a friend that means so much to you and then you find out that they're sick and there's a possibility that you might...lose them. I'll pray for your friend, and I hope for the best for both of you. I'm so...so sorry. On a happier note, this was amazing, especially for one o'clock in the morning. I wish I wrote that well that late at night! Beautiful, beautiful job and tons of hugs...
11PocoSnow15Like it? I loved it. I almost started crying reading this. I'm so sorry. I know what it's like to have a friend that means so much to you and then you find out that they're sick and there's a possibility that you might...lose them. I'll pray for your friend, and I hope for the best for both of you. I'm so...so sorry. On a happier note, this was amazing, especially for one o'clock in the morning. I wish I wrote that well that late at night! Beautiful, beautiful job and tons of hugs...
4/13/2007 c1 3Simfreak111
now this doesn't have the classic poetry format, but it still gets the message across to the reader. it tells a story about your friendship, and that is why i like this poem. it is raw a true, even though it doesn't rhythm or anything. good work and i hope that you friend gets better, and with that i hope that you stay strong through this. Simfreak1
3Simfreak111now this doesn't have the classic poetry format, but it still gets the message across to the reader. it tells a story about your friendship, and that is why i like this poem. it is raw a true, even though it doesn't rhythm or anything. good work and i hope that you friend gets better, and with that i hope that you stay strong through this. Simfreak1
4/13/2007 c1 4SerialXLain
Sad... :( I'm sorry to hear about your friend...
Hmm.
I liked
"I tried to be there for you
And though we drifted apart
We still were best friends"
those lines... Because they're very easy to relate to...
Sorry again and I hope that everything turns out well...
xo
4SerialXLainSad... :( I'm sorry to hear about your friend...
Hmm.
I liked
"I tried to be there for you
And though we drifted apart
We still were best friends"
those lines... Because they're very easy to relate to...
Sorry again and I hope that everything turns out well...
xo