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4/17/2007 c1 47Duzzie
Ah, this was lovely. I really liked it. It had a nice pace and feel as a life was put back together. Nice.
4/17/2007 c1 37Lilyoftheflames
Lovely! You chose the perfect words to describe each of the situations. It tells a story while only stating broken sentences, this is amazing. I love the flow of it as well, you did an excellent job on this one.
4/16/2007 c1 14lockna2
very good i like it keep it up
4/15/2007 c1 9Darkness of Insanity
Interesting, quite good. I find satisfaction that everything has been set right, but sadly in the real world, things to not happen in such a way.

Good effort, reads nicely.

xxMiss Murder

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