for Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness7/5/2007 c9 
2SecretWhispers
Kendra is crazy. Deonte is also crazy. They make a perfect couple. Update soon!
2SecretWhispersKendra is crazy. Deonte is also crazy. They make a perfect couple. Update soon!
7/2/2007 c9 Leanna
Kenny.
Hurry the freak up and get the next chapter out.
If not you shall feel my wrath.
I'm not wrath for nothing you know x]
Now hurry hurry.
I want more hugging and kissing.
&& biting!
xD
Kenny.
Hurry the freak up and get the next chapter out.
If not you shall feel my wrath.
I'm not wrath for nothing you know x]
Now hurry hurry.
I want more hugging and kissing.
&& biting!
xD
7/2/2007 c9 3Lost and No One Cares
It was a good chapter.
And I think what the dad thinks. Hurry up and get them together! But that would end the story, wouldn't it?
3Lost and No One CaresIt was a good chapter.
And I think what the dad thinks. Hurry up and get them together! But that would end the story, wouldn't it?
7/2/2007 c9 13kstar129
kay I pressed the button.Now you have to write more got it?Good.Anyway life sucks.And poor Kendra.Gosh I wish I had Deonte's dad instead of mine.I hate him more than Kendra hates her dad.and I hate my stepmonster more than that.Which is why I don't see them.YAY!Anywya make more SOON!Or else I will send my evil spork minions of doom after you!
13kstar129kay I pressed the button.Now you have to write more got it?Good.Anyway life sucks.And poor Kendra.Gosh I wish I had Deonte's dad instead of mine.I hate him more than Kendra hates her dad.and I hate my stepmonster more than that.Which is why I don't see them.YAY!Anywya make more SOON!Or else I will send my evil spork minions of doom after you!
7/2/2007 c9 loversloveliarslie x
YES. you updated =]. almost ten chapters and the two arent together ? ahh. torture. keep updating, i love your story.
YES. you updated =]. almost ten chapters and the two arent together ? ahh. torture. keep updating, i love your story.
7/2/2007 c9 5Peachie Miss
Aw, cute! Yeah, I don't have anything important to add but continue soon plz.
5Peachie MissAw, cute! Yeah, I don't have anything important to add but continue soon plz.
7/2/2007 c9 mrs.de lioncourt
Great chapter,but I do have 1 question...In the beginning there is an incomplete sentence, and I'd like to know what it was supposed to say. 'Kendra was a' Exactly what was Kendra? ...That's all, and like I said, this was yet another great chapter! 8D
Great chapter,but I do have 1 question...In the beginning there is an incomplete sentence, and I'd like to know what it was supposed to say. 'Kendra was a' Exactly what was Kendra? ...That's all, and like I said, this was yet another great chapter! 8D
7/2/2007 c9 19ihrtbks
Mr. Rilington is cool...he makes cupcakes. Funny both Deonte's dad and lil bro think Kendra's his girlfriend. It's weird but when the lil bro thinks something's going on, he's usually right. Deonte is so sweet; I would ask the same question the girl in the bathroom did: "If you don't want him, can I have him?" Kendra's so lucky to have him and Stella and Kelly to help her get over it all.
UPDATE SOON!
19ihrtbksMr. Rilington is cool...he makes cupcakes. Funny both Deonte's dad and lil bro think Kendra's his girlfriend. It's weird but when the lil bro thinks something's going on, he's usually right. Deonte is so sweet; I would ask the same question the girl in the bathroom did: "If you don't want him, can I have him?" Kendra's so lucky to have him and Stella and Kelly to help her get over it all.
UPDATE SOON!
7/2/2007 c9 2MeZzeDUpGuRL
Well, its cool. I don't know, it's appealing. And you have a nice sense of humor, really, i didn't expect seeing the phrase 'SWIPER NO SWIPING!' in one of these stories. XD Heheh
-Jessi
2MeZzeDUpGuRLWell, its cool. I don't know, it's appealing. And you have a nice sense of humor, really, i didn't expect seeing the phrase 'SWIPER NO SWIPING!' in one of these stories. XD Heheh
-Jessi
6/21/2007 c8 1Amelia15
very good chapter, I think you did a really great job at displaying kendra's emotions... I loved the cheetos and ketchup part! Please keep the awesome work coming! =]
1Amelia15very good chapter, I think you did a really great job at displaying kendra's emotions... I loved the cheetos and ketchup part! Please keep the awesome work coming! =]
6/20/2007 c7 17MidnightMarshmallow
Dang it... stupid filter still messed up my email address in the review for chapter 8. It's midnightmarshmallow @ yahoo (you know the rest). =)
17MidnightMarshmallowDang it... stupid filter still messed up my email address in the review for chapter 8. It's midnightmarshmallow @ yahoo (you know the rest). =)
6/20/2007 c8 MidnightMarshmallow
Poor Kendra. =(
I think I forgot a couple chapters... sorry. Anyway, I really love your story. You seem to have a few grammar and spelling problems, but if you want, I'd be happy to go through the story and fix them for you. Email me at midnightmarshmallow @ if you're interested (without the spaces, of course). I forbid you to stop writing! This is so good. I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Poor Kendra. =(
I think I forgot a couple chapters... sorry. Anyway, I really love your story. You seem to have a few grammar and spelling problems, but if you want, I'd be happy to go through the story and fix them for you. Email me at midnightmarshmallow @ if you're interested (without the spaces, of course). I forbid you to stop writing! This is so good. I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
6/20/2007 c8 5Peachie Miss
lmao. ketchup and cheetos? Eww!Awesome all the same though, can't wait for the next chap, hope it gets easier!
5Peachie Misslmao. ketchup and cheetos? Eww!Awesome all the same though, can't wait for the next chap, hope it gets easier!
6/20/2007 c8 13kstar129
Can I kill that idiotic father thing?I know haow that feels.My stepdad was abusive(physically),my biological dadf was taken from me by my wicked step mother.Think of cinderella's stepmom and you still dont have mine.Now add snow white's.you still don't have susan.she's evil.Anyway Deonte is so sweet!You can tell he really cares about Kendra!He's so cool!Make more SOON!
13kstar129Can I kill that idiotic father thing?I know haow that feels.My stepdad was abusive(physically),my biological dadf was taken from me by my wicked step mother.Think of cinderella's stepmom and you still dont have mine.Now add snow white's.you still don't have susan.she's evil.Anyway Deonte is so sweet!You can tell he really cares about Kendra!He's so cool!Make more SOON!