for Life, Liberty, and the Pursuit of Happiness2/16/2009 c18 johnandvan
I knew Deonte's momma was due back, wondered where she was...and how she left her men to fend for themselves, I know I'm not going to like her...but the work so far was fabulous, Kendra falling and Deonte is such a mature young man at his age, and just exactly her match. More scenes with her girlfriends, and can momma get life though the father walked away I'm feeling a mid life crisis, and would love to know how the mother is handling the divorce out of the blue.
JV
I knew Deonte's momma was due back, wondered where she was...and how she left her men to fend for themselves, I know I'm not going to like her...but the work so far was fabulous, Kendra falling and Deonte is such a mature young man at his age, and just exactly her match. More scenes with her girlfriends, and can momma get life though the father walked away I'm feeling a mid life crisis, and would love to know how the mother is handling the divorce out of the blue.
JV
2/16/2009 c4 johnandvan
I haven't finished reading yet but so far I'm entertained by Kendra and her friends. I have trouble picturing Deonte Rilington as caucasian with that first name unless his mother had friends who gave that to him, but as a character he is confident. Self-assured and very cool nice contrast to Kendra who I think is way to hard on the young man, but entertaining it is. Back to reading.
I haven't finished reading yet but so far I'm entertained by Kendra and her friends. I have trouble picturing Deonte Rilington as caucasian with that first name unless his mother had friends who gave that to him, but as a character he is confident. Self-assured and very cool nice contrast to Kendra who I think is way to hard on the young man, but entertaining it is. Back to reading.
2/11/2009 c18 Jaynie
This is one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. I couldn't get through a single chapter without laughing. I love the way you write! I know this story is currently on hiatus, but I will gladly and patiently wait for more. I don't find stories that truly make me laugh very often.
Even though it's funny, you definitely know how to write an emotional scene. I found myself laughing and crying with Kendra as the story went on. She caught my attention and held it from the first chapter. She's real and I love it. Keep it up, I most definitely will be reading.
This is one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. I couldn't get through a single chapter without laughing. I love the way you write! I know this story is currently on hiatus, but I will gladly and patiently wait for more. I don't find stories that truly make me laugh very often.
Even though it's funny, you definitely know how to write an emotional scene. I found myself laughing and crying with Kendra as the story went on. She caught my attention and held it from the first chapter. She's real and I love it. Keep it up, I most definitely will be reading.
12/12/2008 c18 JB
OMG I love you but can you please update? I'm dying..
OMG I love you but can you please update? I'm dying..
11/24/2008 c18 tah
The story is very enjoyable and very funny. Deonte and Kendra are very cute together. And Kendra is corky and weird character but very loveable. Looking forward to reading more.
The story is very enjoyable and very funny. Deonte and Kendra are very cute together. And Kendra is corky and weird character but very loveable. Looking forward to reading more.
10/3/2008 c18 tonirenee
Where is the rest? JUst as the drama builds and the story climaxes... Anxiously waitin
Where is the rest? JUst as the drama builds and the story climaxes... Anxiously waitin
10/2/2008 c4 Toni Renne
Enjoying them all. great work.
Enjoying them all. great work.
9/13/2008 c8 kylie
good story
good story
8/10/2008 c18 JB
plz write more!
i'm goin crazy.
plz write more!
i'm goin crazy.