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12/27/2008 c1 Chasing Skylines
Wow, I really liked this piece. There was so much emotion behind the words, and it really brings to mind lots of memories and thoughts. Thought-provoking, I guess you could say.

I also like the way you wrote it, the childish innocence behind the words, and then how it starts chipping away. It's like... character development in a poem. Haha.

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1/17/2008 c1 17erinox
beautiful.

so I went to your profile page, and I'm like.

O.O

I srsly need to find the time to read all of your poetry/stories?
1/11/2008 c1 31Lurid Black
Awesome, really well written, I see no ways it could improve, its a great poem, keep writing!

~Lurid~
4/16/2007 c1 4The Monkey King of Pirates
Beautifully done! I am going to add it to my favs!

Best Wishes!

*TSP

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