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4/16/2007 c1 146Sexy Vampirechick
This is a really nice piece.I adore it!

Only one problemo.I think it would sound better if you break this part into little smaller pieces.

"I see my angel's eyes,"

"Big and bright."

"They are the only light."

"I see."

And it still rhymes with "The rest is hidden from me"

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