for One Day5/18/2007 c1 
18SummerSun325
omg
i freaking LOVE this.
it's freaking AWESOME.
you crazy lil mofo.
i love the part that goes:
"All she needs is a guitar in her hands
and a tube of red lipstick
in the back pocket of her jeans."
it's pretty sweet.
this kinda reminds me of instant star.
idk why.
idk, my bff jill?
teehee, but yea, fucking awesome you lil fucker.
love.
18SummerSun325omg
i freaking LOVE this.
it's freaking AWESOME.
you crazy lil mofo.
i love the part that goes:
"All she needs is a guitar in her hands
and a tube of red lipstick
in the back pocket of her jeans."
it's pretty sweet.
this kinda reminds me of instant star.
idk why.
idk, my bff jill?
teehee, but yea, fucking awesome you lil fucker.
love.
5/7/2007 c1 46antigonelives
"her eyes are a map of the world,
she smiles like a symphony.
Yet another song written about her
can’t she be nothing?"
I love those lines, and though I'm usually not a fan of simple, real, happy poetry, I liked this. It's simple, but you really get a feel for the poem, you know? Like I could relate to the speaker and all.
Off to read more of your work!
~Cristina
46antigonelives"her eyes are a map of the world,
she smiles like a symphony.
Yet another song written about her
can’t she be nothing?"
I love those lines, and though I'm usually not a fan of simple, real, happy poetry, I liked this. It's simple, but you really get a feel for the poem, you know? Like I could relate to the speaker and all.
Off to read more of your work!
~Cristina