for The Mobile4/17/2007 c1 
46antigonelives
This is highly intriguing in that it's so simply written and on the short side, which sucks, in a way, because the last two paragraphs left me anxious for more. Also, this sort of reminded me of Wilde's "The Picture of Dorian Gray" (have you read it?) with the whole, 'a work of art destroys a youthful soul' theme. Great piece! :)
~Cristina
46antigonelivesThis is highly intriguing in that it's so simply written and on the short side, which sucks, in a way, because the last two paragraphs left me anxious for more. Also, this sort of reminded me of Wilde's "The Picture of Dorian Gray" (have you read it?) with the whole, 'a work of art destroys a youthful soul' theme. Great piece! :)
~Cristina