for Slim Pickings Lead to Drastic Propositions8/20/2017 c1 ramblingrobin
Lmao. I'm totally sucked into this already. And so yummy! Love it. Xoxo Robin
Lmao. I'm totally sucked into this already. And so yummy! Love it. Xoxo Robin
7/13/2016 c5 Lexie.Loo
This is so poorly written it makes me cringe. The concept is interesting but the incongruence between some of the characters and their behaviour is offputting. I'm assuming you're a young writer, I wrote much the same way when I was younger and it's always hard to recognize the flaws in your own writing. I hope you'll consider editing this story and revising it in a way that supports your interesting concept better
This is so poorly written it makes me cringe. The concept is interesting but the incongruence between some of the characters and their behaviour is offputting. I'm assuming you're a young writer, I wrote much the same way when I was younger and it's always hard to recognize the flaws in your own writing. I hope you'll consider editing this story and revising it in a way that supports your interesting concept better
4/30/2014 c20 Guest
I love the endings and how he was changing to be a new person
I love the endings and how he was changing to be a new person
4/23/2014 c20 
4rockspapersnscissors
Oh-MY GAWD! You evil person-! I'm in nearly tears about poor Tyler-! Screw Aaron-! As stupid as it sounds, I'm a hopeless romantic, Alex and Tyler should've been together-! T.T
I'm crushed at the ending-! I loved it up until that point... DX
I give you an 8/10, but it could've been a 10/10 if not for the end-! :'(
-RPS
4rockspapersnscissorsOh-MY GAWD! You evil person-! I'm in nearly tears about poor Tyler-! Screw Aaron-! As stupid as it sounds, I'm a hopeless romantic, Alex and Tyler should've been together-! T.T
I'm crushed at the ending-! I loved it up until that point... DX
I give you an 8/10, but it could've been a 10/10 if not for the end-! :'(
-RPS
3/6/2014 c20 jj
Great story! I really loved it! I did feel like the change in tyler's personality was maybe a little too much and I don't think all his mood swings from the beginning of the story were really explained, but maybe I missed it. Also, and in no way do I claim to be an expert in date rape drugs, but even if he was drugged when he first went upstairs, the drugs didn't seem to still be affecting him when Alex came in, so wouldn't he have stopped? But otherwise great job!
Great story! I really loved it! I did feel like the change in tyler's personality was maybe a little too much and I don't think all his mood swings from the beginning of the story were really explained, but maybe I missed it. Also, and in no way do I claim to be an expert in date rape drugs, but even if he was drugged when he first went upstairs, the drugs didn't seem to still be affecting him when Alex came in, so wouldn't he have stopped? But otherwise great job!
8/4/2013 c20 semantics
I just picked up this story and it has been so interesting I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. There were some grammatical errors but the story has flowed really nicely. I was bawling, seriously. I think we all could relate to Alex-from his poor relationship with his sister, to his low self-esteem. The way we're all waiting for a special someone to sweep us off our feet and be our everything. The last little bit with Chris felt a little rushed even though there were some hints earlier in the story that suggested that something was going on between Chris and Alex. Brad was such a jerk off, but his character was a little lacking because he mostly showed up in dialogue (when other people were talking about him.)
Great story! It was really touching, and I think you did a fantastic job :)
I just picked up this story and it has been so interesting I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen. There were some grammatical errors but the story has flowed really nicely. I was bawling, seriously. I think we all could relate to Alex-from his poor relationship with his sister, to his low self-esteem. The way we're all waiting for a special someone to sweep us off our feet and be our everything. The last little bit with Chris felt a little rushed even though there were some hints earlier in the story that suggested that something was going on between Chris and Alex. Brad was such a jerk off, but his character was a little lacking because he mostly showed up in dialogue (when other people were talking about him.)
Great story! It was really touching, and I think you did a fantastic job :)
1/14/2013 c20 Guest
O.O damn this is so good! I just died!
O.O damn this is so good! I just died!