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2/7/2008 c17 2mia5081
You are forgiven lol. And to prove how much of a dork I am, I copied and pasted Tyler's Italian phrase into Google's language tool section...he is one naughty, naughty boy lol. Loved the chapter :D

Update soon!

~Mia
2/7/2008 c17 10CaFFy
“Tickets for train D.”? Don't you mean metrocard or x rides? o-o;;
2/7/2008 c17 KittenAround
I LOVE IT! I can't wait for more!
2/7/2008 c17 narcissistic
aw so cute i want someone to do that for me...cheap bastards...lol
2/7/2008 c17 Sekre
Wow .. thats quite a gift. Though I'm curious to what Tyler was saying to him in italian, lol.
2/4/2008 c16 1XxAmericanxBeautyxX
The whole Tyler being nice thing was starting to weird me out as I continued reading that story. But I quickly looked past that seeing that I actually enjoy reading this story and can't wait to read more.
2/1/2008 c16 Zam89
M, it's kinda like a soap opera with all the drama you have going here. I can't wait to read the next chapter... and I have to admit, I'll be forever traumatized if Alex and Tyler don't end up together... they're just... perfect. Very nice job hun... update soon, yeah? =D

~Dawn
1/30/2008 c16 2Dancer.In.The.Rain
NNO!

Update I want to know what happens with Alex and Tyler...This story is really good...I love it
1/20/2008 c16 4Vicious Hyperbolizer
This is a really sweet story, in an odd-twisted way.

Keep it up!
1/13/2008 c16 Midnights Scream
wow.it's neverending drama with these people, but at least Tyler seemed to get it. Nit much else to say. :) good job.
1/12/2008 c13 3Duuude
Omgsh. Wow. I don't know what to say accept that this has to be one of the most amazing slashes I've ever read. It's beautiful, Alex is beautiful. Seriously he's like a fricken piece of artwork, and he really is fucked up. But then so is Tyler, that's why they're good for each other. They can fix each other. What Kayla said was really low, she played on his insecurities. Not fair at all. The mother did the same, for some reason I think Carlos is way better than him.

I can't wait to read the rest. I like it. It's nice. I definitely want to see how everything works out. I'm glad for fuck's sake that a fictional character's happy, shows that your work is pretty life-like. The angst really works for the story. Sometimes it gets old with other stories and maybe a little fake. You wrote it out nicely. Everyone's a little fucked up in their own ways and you portrayed the after effects of everything perfectly! Fantastic job. I'll read some more later. =]
1/12/2008 c16 9An Eccentric Caffeine Addict
This was really nice, really, really, really nice.

However, the chapters usually have a few mistakes in them so you may want to read this over yourself before you post it. I noticed you mix up their, they're and sense is spelled with an 's' not a 'c', unless you spell it differently from wherever you're from...But I haven't scene anyone spell it that way before so I thought I'd point it out. So, yeah, look over your work because it shows you care about your story. :)

Not sure how I feel about the two lovely main characters...Dunno, they both have good and bad qualities. I like Christine though...xD She's awesome. And the smut is fantastic! :D It's frigin' awesome to read, you've got a talent for that shit. xD

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
1/8/2008 c16 10CaFFy
I wouldn't be able to sell it. =|
1/8/2008 c11 CaFFy
Ew mushy... ;;
1/8/2008 c9 22NeonX
I think Tyler must've mistaken the centimeter side of the ruler for the inch one. The majority of men are about 5 inches. Trust me, no amount of science will change that in the near future.
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