for Slim Pickings Lead to Drastic Propositions6/17/2007 c7 the story
God, I hope Tyler gets the "truth" or story from Alex soon cause his whinging without clear reason is starting to get annoying. I understand Tyler is annoying but so is mysteriously moody Alex.
God, I hope Tyler gets the "truth" or story from Alex soon cause his whinging without clear reason is starting to get annoying. I understand Tyler is annoying but so is mysteriously moody Alex.
6/17/2007 c9 
6Satan'z Myth
That was actually really, really good ^-^ I enjoyed the story, and the sex was actually written very well :) Awkward sex is always enjoyable :) However, I noticed LOTS of typos and errors, and I was wondering if you would want me to re-read and proof-read it and check them. What say ?
6Satan'z MythThat was actually really, really good ^-^ I enjoyed the story, and the sex was actually written very well :) Awkward sex is always enjoyable :) However, I noticed LOTS of typos and errors, and I was wondering if you would want me to re-read and proof-read it and check them. What say ?
6/16/2007 c9 xx Sakura Kiss xx
WOW, this was truly amazing. I loved it, this is the first Yaoi i've ever read...and proplably the only one i'll ever read. -^-^- but update soon i can't wait. .
WOW, this was truly amazing. I loved it, this is the first Yaoi i've ever read...and proplably the only one i'll ever read. -^-^- but update soon i can't wait. .
6/16/2007 c9 2Marylyn-Mercy
Amazingly amazing. Such hilarity, and emotion and raw sexiness. Congrats, and I'll have you know that as hard as it was to write all that out there...you did a WONDERFUL job. Can't wait to read more. :-)
2Marylyn-MercyAmazingly amazing. Such hilarity, and emotion and raw sexiness. Congrats, and I'll have you know that as hard as it was to write all that out there...you did a WONDERFUL job. Can't wait to read more. :-)
6/16/2007 c9 17I'll Be Your Fairytale
Oh damn. That was hot, burning, on fire. Seriously, Tyler being all possessive and violent and all that, but still being kinda nice, I, just wow. Gave me shivers, lol. Update again soon, and as much of that as you want!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
17I'll Be Your FairytaleOh damn. That was hot, burning, on fire. Seriously, Tyler being all possessive and violent and all that, but still being kinda nice, I, just wow. Gave me shivers, lol. Update again soon, and as much of that as you want!
Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
6/15/2007 c9 4Amindaya
On the contrary, I don't think I'd have liked it had it been anything other than awkward. :) Good job.
AH! It was such a great chapter and then the end TOTALLY ruined it for me. 'of it was any constellation.'- For one thing, that's the wrong word usage. It should be 'indication.' But it shouldn't be constellation ANYWAY, but consolation. Constellations are stars, dude.
This is NOT a flame...think of it as very intense grammar correction suggestions. :) I still love the story, it's just that mistake right there drives me crazy.
4AmindayaOn the contrary, I don't think I'd have liked it had it been anything other than awkward. :) Good job.
AH! It was such a great chapter and then the end TOTALLY ruined it for me. 'of it was any constellation.'- For one thing, that's the wrong word usage. It should be 'indication.' But it shouldn't be constellation ANYWAY, but consolation. Constellations are stars, dude.
This is NOT a flame...think of it as very intense grammar correction suggestions. :) I still love the story, it's just that mistake right there drives me crazy.
6/15/2007 c8 Brilliant Demise
Well, i just keep popping up everywhere, huh? lol
i thought i'd look through your other stories, and i fell in love with this one as well...
I'm obsessed, so shoot me.
loved the ending to this chapter, btw!
Well, i just keep popping up everywhere, huh? lol
i thought i'd look through your other stories, and i fell in love with this one as well...
I'm obsessed, so shoot me.
loved the ending to this chapter, btw!