5/21/2007 c5 6purestmaiden
This story makes me smile. It's totally great. And what's up with Kayla, anyways?
This story makes me smile. It's totally great. And what's up with Kayla, anyways?
5/2/2007 c3 Christina
Holy [insert swear word of your choice]! Great job! I love it! Another unbelievable story =) I'm glad I stumbled across you; talent is rare, and you've got the gift. Hope you'll update soon! ^^
Holy [insert swear word of your choice]! Great job! I love it! Another unbelievable story =) I'm glad I stumbled across you; talent is rare, and you've got the gift. Hope you'll update soon! ^^
4/29/2007 c3 KissMyConverse
Wahnderful chapter. :D
“Come’ on baby, trust me.”He whispered into my neck. Famous last words much?
^^That sentence made me think of My Chemical Romance. Haha. There's a line in one of their songs where they go, "Trust me." So that made me think of that. Then I saw "Famous Last Words much?" "Famous Last Words" is one of their songs. So naturally, like any crazed MCR fan, I cracked up. Ahem. Great chapter, and keep up the lovely work~!
Wahnderful chapter. :D
“Come’ on baby, trust me.”He whispered into my neck. Famous last words much?
^^That sentence made me think of My Chemical Romance. Haha. There's a line in one of their songs where they go, "Trust me." So that made me think of that. Then I saw "Famous Last Words much?" "Famous Last Words" is one of their songs. So naturally, like any crazed MCR fan, I cracked up. Ahem. Great chapter, and keep up the lovely work~!
4/24/2007 c2 25Esquirella
A really great premise for a story. Alex is a wonderfully complex character.
A really great premise for a story. Alex is a wonderfully complex character.
4/24/2007 c2 KissMyConverse
Pretty good. I'm kind of confused about the whole "accident" and the guilt thing. :/ But whatevs. I'm lovin' it anyway.
Pretty good. I'm kind of confused about the whole "accident" and the guilt thing. :/ But whatevs. I'm lovin' it anyway.
4/18/2007 c1 subtlethief
Very interesting start,promising rich story, i'll keep waiting for update, i hope for a long story, acctually for a long long story...
Very interesting start,promising rich story, i'll keep waiting for update, i hope for a long story, acctually for a long long story...