5/24/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
I love the description in this. It's very vivid-I can clearly picture everyting both visually and emotionally. Your word choice is also very chilling, which sets the mood well.

[arms thrown wide, awaiting]

The wording here caught me up a bit. There were too many "w"s that were hard to say in succession.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)