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5/24/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
I love the description in this. It's very vivid-I can clearly picture everyting both visually and emotionally. Your word choice is also very chilling, which sets the mood well.

[arms thrown wide, awaiting]

The wording here caught me up a bit. There were too many "w"s that were hard to say in succession.

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
4/18/2007 c1 4The Monkey King of Pirates
OMG! This is amazing! I have to add it to my favs!

Best Wishes!

*TSP

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