for My World8/1/2012 c1 abe11a
I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.
I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.
4/25/2007 c1 
65Nemonus
Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.
65NemonusPretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.
4/18/2007 c1 2brightlywound93
It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.
Kali
2brightlywound93It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.
Kali
4/18/2007 c1 flies.like.decay
If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.
If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.
4/18/2007 c1 4The Monkey King of Pirates
Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...
A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!
You always do a beautiful job!
*TSP
4The Monkey King of PiratesVery pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...
A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!
You always do a beautiful job!
*TSP