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8/1/2012 c1 abe11a
I like this poem. For some reason it reminds of Shel Silverstein’s Invitation from Where the Sidewalk Ends.
4/11/2008 c1 17Azena Kira
Great poem, I really loved it.
5/23/2007 c1 9peteygirl
yay! thank you for inviting me! and i've just arrived thank you. : )
4/25/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Pretty good. Too peaceful for me, honestly, but the rhythm is pretty good. Sometimes the rhymes seem forced.
4/18/2007 c1 2brightlywound93
It's great to have an escape from the rest of the world! Nice job.

Kali
4/18/2007 c1 flies.like.decay
If that's the case, I want to be in your world. Ha ha. Look! Pure dishonesty. I say "ha ha" and "lol" and I don't even laugh. Gr. I should just listen to Josh Groban and stop reviewing people.
4/18/2007 c1 4The Monkey King of Pirates
Very pretty! He! He! It is I, Hidden Sword of Truth...

A.K.A. Tiffany Pradeep!

You always do a beautiful job!

*TSP
4/18/2007 c1 4Kayla Pich
that's really good

short and sweet

Keep going! :]

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