for pretending12/27/2007 c1 
3Molly Renaud
Gah, i felt like that for so long.
i think everyone has those times.
but you really capture them well in writing.
Molly
3Molly RenaudGah, i felt like that for so long.
i think everyone has those times.
but you really capture them well in writing.
Molly
9/2/2007 c1 11vindictive.rumors
Very well done. Same goes for the poem about your brother. Don't doubt your writing ability, your writing is the one thing you can trust... Even if people disagree don't listen to them, take there critisism and make your self a better writer. If you ever need me I'm here. =)
- (Krystyna)
11vindictive.rumorsVery well done. Same goes for the poem about your brother. Don't doubt your writing ability, your writing is the one thing you can trust... Even if people disagree don't listen to them, take there critisism and make your self a better writer. If you ever need me I'm here. =)
- (Krystyna)
8/26/2007 c1 ItMustBeLove
I like the twist in the end, it's almost refreshing (as in, it's good she's (or he?) isn't totally bottling it up. This is pretty good, slightly emo (but not in a bad way :D), but still good. Keep it up!
I like the twist in the end, it's almost refreshing (as in, it's good she's (or he?) isn't totally bottling it up. This is pretty good, slightly emo (but not in a bad way :D), but still good. Keep it up!
7/18/2007 c1 332smile for the sunshine
I know what you mean again. Totally. Your work is really good. Keep up the great work. =]
332smile for the sunshineI know what you mean again. Totally. Your work is really good. Keep up the great work. =]
6/10/2007 c1 socks-lost
so sad but really good. i like depressing stuff. Yeah pretending sucks great job keep it up
so sad but really good. i like depressing stuff. Yeah pretending sucks great job keep it up
4/21/2007 c1 Cracked Mirror Image
cries...thats sad...
we all need to write something happy...
good though...ur getting better
gRaCe
cries...thats sad...
we all need to write something happy...
good though...ur getting better
gRaCe