for We Be Pirates8/19/2009 c1 
17Xein of Nethling
i luv the last two lines...
actually, the entire thing is really good. you capture the life of a pirate in a really short, awesome way =D
great job!
and of course, long live captain jack sparrow! ;)
~Xein
17Xein of Nethlingi luv the last two lines...
actually, the entire thing is really good. you capture the life of a pirate in a really short, awesome way =D
great job!
and of course, long live captain jack sparrow! ;)
~Xein
12/27/2008 c1 Chasing Skylines
I like your rhyming, because it actually flowed.
I also like the classic pirate tone of the poem through the words.
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I like your rhyming, because it actually flowed.
I also like the classic pirate tone of the poem through the words.
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3/20/2008 c1 59Tranquil Thorns
Yay for pirates!
Love the sea ditty, especially the lines 'In the storm we roam/Under the ocean foam'. Nicely put. =)
59Tranquil ThornsYay for pirates!
Love the sea ditty, especially the lines 'In the storm we roam/Under the ocean foam'. Nicely put. =)
5/21/2007 c1 h.k. love
I love this! It just has all the qualities of an old pirate shanty. Keep it up! :]
I love this! It just has all the qualities of an old pirate shanty. Keep it up! :]
4/20/2007 c1 Ajna
That's cute! I really liked it; I haven't seen a pirate poem... ever, I think. At least, not one that wasn't pretentious and obscenely boring. You did a really great job; it was nice and simple! :]
That's cute! I really liked it; I haven't seen a pirate poem... ever, I think. At least, not one that wasn't pretentious and obscenely boring. You did a really great job; it was nice and simple! :]
4/19/2007 c1 11PocoSnow15
Oh wow, loved your rhyming! Sounds like a pirate to me! This could really be a good song to sing on a ship, I could definitely see it in Pirates of the Carribean. Awesome job!
11PocoSnow15Oh wow, loved your rhyming! Sounds like a pirate to me! This could really be a good song to sing on a ship, I could definitely see it in Pirates of the Carribean. Awesome job!
4/19/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Very good. I like this poem a lot. Well done and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^
81Princess-anna57Very good. I like this poem a lot. Well done and keep writing!
~Anna~ ^_^