6/6/2007 c17 2shades-of-light
Puppies! Ha, Jayden's rather adorable. I kinda want Seaton to just know what happened to Jayden and get all crazy protective and all that because it makes me laugh. I also want him to see more of the yelling, cursing Jayden that seems to be stuck in his head (sometimes I feel the same way). This story is filled with lots of moments that make me chuckle gleefully, even if they aren't meant to be laughed at, I love it. So update soon!

6/6/2007 c17 Chameleonduality
*jumping up and down* Ah! Seaton hugged Jayden! And Jayden cried, and he yelled again, and he called Seaton by his first name (not without prompting, mind you)... my god, there were a lot of firsts for lil' Jay-Jay. But it's so good that he's getting his emotions out now. They've gotta be strong, after having been kept in for so long. But I loved that bit where Seaton hugs him... *going starry-eyed and emitting sigh of contentment* O.. the tension between them - oh la la.

And hell yes this chapter heightened my suspicions about the whole car phobia... *shiver* And he was a GUIDANCE COUNSELOR in a SCHOOL. How sick can it get? But I guess that's the way of things, I remember when they let a paedophile with a jail record become a caretaker in a school somewhere in N.I. I remember hearing about it on the news. Yes, my country is CRAZY. They named an airport after a famous football player who dabbled in serious alcoholism in his free time when he died (read: two liver replacement operations, neither of which worked).

And Seaton doesn't know the half of what Charlie's done to Jayden... I really wouldn't want to see his face when he finds out (Seaton's too damn curious not to find out, that's for sure). Like all the other reviewers, I'm definitely NOT tired of dear ol' Seaton; he intrigues ume too much to be tiring (at all, in fact). So many unanswered questions... I like his strong personality, though. Quirky too - the pizza's a nice touch. Ahh... *note of irritation*... there is an ad for pizza on tv at the minute, which talks about real italian pizza having a thin base with lotsa toppings and then, who is the producer of said ITALIAN pizza, pray tell? A friggin' GERMAN company? Does German = Italy or something? *frustration* And they show people eating pizza with a FORK! Who does that? (Although Seaton might, if he put his mind to it)

I've saved a nonexistent puppy! Whoot! (I have a dog, who is orange and white, has one BIG brown eye, a dodgy leg and is getting on a bit in doggy years. Love her to bits. ^.^) I volunteer at my local dogs charity, and the dogs there are gems. Maltreated gems, but gems none-the-less. There's a dalmation with three legs who can run like a greyhound, and an overprotective mother who doesn't stop barking for five minutes when someone goes near her puppies. She's a doll.

Whoo... *eyes starting to glaze over*... It's nearly 1 in the morning now, and I've been up since 7:30 am, sat a Chemistry exam, went to English Lit revision and suffered through a Pilates (torture) hour-long session. And I have an exam next monday, and riding tomorrow. Somebody kill me, please, so that I don't have to take the bother of doing it myself.

There's more Seaton in the next chappie? Thank'ye! Ah, this is how to treat a girl... I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! And I'm not gonna apologise about the review length this time... I've learnt. I think it's generally cause my friends tell me that I ramble WAY too much in letters/emails, and I'm always doubtful of other people being as tolerant of it as they are. But any-who.

See ya next time!

^.^ Peace.

6/6/2007 c17 2mia5081
i absolutely love seaton, and i really hope he helps jayden get over the whole charlie issue. though i have to admit, with charlie spouting all that crap it might be a little bit hard. but i love it!

update soon!

~mia

6/6/2007 c17 34Extraho-Uxor
another amazing chapter. I'm glad to see the seaton/jayden thing moving forward. I can't believe how wonderful seaton is. I think he's a cop... I get that feeling. but ive been known to be wrong so i could be lol. dont tell me. well, can't wait for the next chapter. BTW, so sad to see the stuff charlie expected from poor young Jayden. makes me sad that he was victimized like that. keep up the great work

6/6/2007 c17 float.along.lily.pad5t8
i've never reviewed before, but ur story is incredible and i'm in love with both Jayden and Seaton and I'm in utter loathing with Charlie and Jayden's dad. I'm wondering if his dad knows about Charlie and is just being outrageously cruel by wanting him to watch Jayden, or if he doesn't know about it. meh. Charlie and him are bastards either way : /

aw, saving nonexistent kittens and puppies ^_^ how sweet and awesome!

okay, all of us reviewers should band together and slowly mutilate Charlie with dozens of sharp pointy thing and then fillet him over flames and feed his remains to our kittens and puppies : )

and then celebrate by having a nonestent bakefest and baking loads of delicious cookies. -_-

update soon please! ^_^

6/6/2007 c17 Midnights Scream
I could never get tired of Seaton and awh poor Jayden yet he seems happy too so he's got a little bit of happiness at least. :)

6/6/2007 c17 2Du Soleil Oriental
You should be proud, this story pulled me out of my 9 month no streak. ^.^ Of course school had much to do with that but I was mostly just bored with the stuff on here.

And now I'm not.

6/6/2007 c17 Feel The Waltz
A non exsistant puppy eh? Fab =D I'll call him Kitty. But anyway UBERLY amaze chapter as always. Keep up the good work mayte :]