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5/8/2007 c13 phoenixmaiden13
Oh no Jayden! Seaton to the rescue right?
5/8/2007 c12 3Lucas D
Hmm.. it's been a while, eh?

Well, I'll start from the end. That Corin dude makes some of my sensors go wild but I'm not sure which exactly. He seems caring, and a tad pushy, but then again, some people just don't see the 'care' until it literally hits them in the head.

And the girls are just... ugh. I am getting somewhat incoherent here, but you must understand the horror I'm going through whenever reading a scene with those two bags of bones and Progesterone. They sure add variety and lightness to the story, so ignore my dislike of them and keep it up the torture.

There sure seems to be a lot of Charlie lately. And I went through some of your review responses, and I must say that I don't hate Charlie so much anymore. Yes, I do realize it's Jayden, an innocent kid who doesn't know wrong from right that we're talking about here, but maybe it's something in the way you write it that makes me feel sorry for Charlie. I mean, at least he's taking his time with coaxing Jay into it, making it seem like something good and acceptable. If nothing else, I respect the man for his patience.

I do hope I won't scare anyone with my reviews.

One scum aside, Alfred is a god when it comes to terrorizing kids and, excuse my french, fucking with the mind of a teenager. For a moment there I hoped Jayden's other personality will take over and stab his pops with one of the shards, but Jay seems to be mentally stable (or as stable as anyone can be when living such a life). Strong, strong boy. Pathetic, but strong.

This is all for now. Do post the next chapter, so that people can go 'ohh-ing' and 'ahh-ing' and gasping all day long. Man, your cliffhangers are evil.

5/8/2007 c12 1partie traumatic
I love your story.Here I was bored on a Tuesday with nothing to do and volia.A great story comes along.I love Jayden too.I just want to lock him up in my closet.I don't know what to think about Corin yet.He seems okay.I'll be dying until your next update.
5/7/2007 c12 magalina
I like Corin! I like... Great chapter! I LOVE how Jayden is a bit more secure now... and he actually said NO to someone, that´s awesome. But sell drugs? Poor him... Bastard Alfred... Seaton,. go rescue him! xO

Update soon! And the chapter was just the perfect lenght... you wouldn´t believe how many interruptions I had to read it... :)
5/7/2007 c12 Jin Tae
It isn't fair to bribe with cookies. The compulsory grab for a non-existent cookie totally overrides the individual's choice to review or not. But anywoo...

Corin smells like trouble. He cares, and he respects the boundaries Jayden sets. So, of course such a nice guy must be a villain, right? After all, Charley was always nice to Jayden, and we all know what became of that. I haven't decided yet, but I'm curious about this new character.

I'm also curious if Jay is really going to sell his father's drugs or if he is going to come up with a different way to get the money. Like applying for a job at that bookstore he is always in.
5/7/2007 c12 25Esquirella
I find Corin pretty interesting. Alfred still needs to fry in boiling oil. But, of course, I'm pulling for Seaton/Jayden action sometime in the near future ... hopefully ... ?
5/6/2007 c12 5Squirrel Activist
You know what I said to myself when I got to the end of this chapter?

"Oh no, don't tell me it's over already!"


This is really, really, really good.

And when I say really, really, really good, I mean it's REALLY, really really good.



You should update.

5/6/2007 c12 justareviewer
"Corin" is a cat's name. But I can't remember which cat's. Ah yes, the fat white one from Dragonball Z. Me and that cat had some good times, I tell you what.
5/6/2007 c12 Kate McGuire
I've been reading this from the beginning (sorry for not reviewing sooner, I'm incredibly lazy) and I love it. Jayden just can't get a break can he? I like Corin, he seems nice, anyone that can be kind to Jayden, make him feel better, is a plus. Seaton's character is also interesting, and Jayden's crush on him makes a lot of sense. Jayden is afraid of being hurt, but still subconsciously clinging to any kindness shown to him. Looking forward to the next update!
5/6/2007 c12 sugardandy
actually yes, I am procrastinating on my homework, and because of relay for life I've had seven hours of sleep for the whole weekend, and I have yet to get to my homework ... and its like nine already. Shit ... *cries* but I had to read the story! I need my fix of online yaoi stories or I don't function!
5/6/2007 c12 3otter pop
Stupid Charlie and his stupid hands. I hope he dies a slow painful death, making poor Jay have nightmares. He's too cute, I wish I knew someone like that. Except that'd be sad, 'cause his life sucks. Well I like Corin, he seems nice, but not as good as Seaton. He's my favorite. I'm glad that you updated so soon! It made me happy; do it again.
5/6/2007 c12 Cealex
Oh no... selling drugs now? Shit I hope he doesn't get busted. And crap these nightmares are just getting worse and worse _
5/6/2007 c12 14Night Play
Uh ohh! Competition? OO. so excited!
5/6/2007 c12 1twilove
poor Corin, looks like he has a little crush on Jayden! Too bad his heart's already taken by Seaton. Ah well, love is never fair.

By the way Corin sounds Hot, and a down to earth guy. I like the way he tried to make small talk with Jayden, but too bad he was occupied with other thoughts, if you get what I mean.

As of now, Charlie absolutely repulses me. All I want to do is strangle him! Could Charlie be the reason why Jayden is gay?

Just a thought. Love both chapters 11 and 12 and hope you update soon!
5/6/2007 c12 1Rebel 0ne
Well, I apologize again for not reviewing sooner. Chapter 12 was good. Things are progressing nicely! :) Update soon!
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