for Breaking The Mirror4/26/2007 c6 
7Love Eternally
Well the guy could be a good singer or something. . . that would make him better, and it's good you left charlie a sercert. you don't want to give too much away. oh and two things. I LOVE TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD! lol. as soon as i saw the name "jem" i was like yay! and yes, catcher in the rye sucked. i mean sucked bad. it was all about him complaining how he hated people who pretended to be something they were. and he was the one who did the most pretending. grr. stupid guy. anyways, it was an amazing chapter. i loved it.
7Love EternallyWell the guy could be a good singer or something. . . that would make him better, and it's good you left charlie a sercert. you don't want to give too much away. oh and two things. I LOVE TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD! lol. as soon as i saw the name "jem" i was like yay! and yes, catcher in the rye sucked. i mean sucked bad. it was all about him complaining how he hated people who pretended to be something they were. and he was the one who did the most pretending. grr. stupid guy. anyways, it was an amazing chapter. i loved it.
4/26/2007 c6 3Lucas D
I'm not too sure if guys like him need friends like those girls, but that may be just the bastard in me speaking. All in all, i still don't like the females in this story, although their actions and words are understandable and usually not uncalled for.
Charlie, on the other hand, seems almost as lovable as that Alfred of yours. That is, he must be important if you sort of introduced him this late in the story, and at such a crucial moment no less. I'm looking forward to getting to know the bastard. I feel he will soon occupy a special place in my heart.
Seaton is real. Maybe even a tad too real for a fictional character. Reminds me of someone I used to know, and I won't be surprised if he's based on a living acquaintance of your own. As a character, he stands out the most for me, even though his appearance is usually brief.
The lack of Alfred in this chapter almost made me miss him. It may sound sadistic to you, but among my favorite moments so far are those about him making junior's life a living hell.
As for the sweet trivialities - Vanilla cakes? Never heard of those. And white chocolate isn't even chocolate. Besides, it's way too sweet. Well, chocolate ice-cream flavored reviews it is then, in exchange for more updates (better sooner than later, but the current dose of Breaking the Mirror will last me for about a week, so take your time enjoying life between updates).
Cheers, and good luck.
3Lucas DI'm not too sure if guys like him need friends like those girls, but that may be just the bastard in me speaking. All in all, i still don't like the females in this story, although their actions and words are understandable and usually not uncalled for.
Charlie, on the other hand, seems almost as lovable as that Alfred of yours. That is, he must be important if you sort of introduced him this late in the story, and at such a crucial moment no less. I'm looking forward to getting to know the bastard. I feel he will soon occupy a special place in my heart.
Seaton is real. Maybe even a tad too real for a fictional character. Reminds me of someone I used to know, and I won't be surprised if he's based on a living acquaintance of your own. As a character, he stands out the most for me, even though his appearance is usually brief.
The lack of Alfred in this chapter almost made me miss him. It may sound sadistic to you, but among my favorite moments so far are those about him making junior's life a living hell.
As for the sweet trivialities - Vanilla cakes? Never heard of those. And white chocolate isn't even chocolate. Besides, it's way too sweet. Well, chocolate ice-cream flavored reviews it is then, in exchange for more updates (better sooner than later, but the current dose of Breaking the Mirror will last me for about a week, so take your time enjoying life between updates).
Cheers, and good luck.
4/26/2007 c6 14Night Play
I like how you write and update really FAST! xD! i like longer chapters. only because i get to read more. haha!
=]
14Night PlayI like how you write and update really FAST! xD! i like longer chapters. only because i get to read more. haha!
=]
4/26/2007 c5 25Esquirella
I like both the chicks and it's hilarious to see them handle Jayden's little lies like that. It doesn't seem like people call him on them, and it's good to see him get friends despite his father.
25EsquirellaI like both the chicks and it's hilarious to see them handle Jayden's little lies like that. It doesn't seem like people call him on them, and it's good to see him get friends despite his father.
4/26/2007 c5 And-on-Anonymous
I imagine I will :) I've got you on story alert, so i should be.
Good chapter, I liked the bit where you upped the suspense about the slashes on his back- good technique.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
I imagine I will :) I've got you on story alert, so i should be.
Good chapter, I liked the bit where you upped the suspense about the slashes on his back- good technique.
Looking forward to seeing what happens next :)
4/25/2007 c5 14Night Play
Omg! lovelovelove.
I love Seaton. ~ hahaha. and you know, this is my favorite line:
–which is just a bit difficult on these oversized chopsticks –
hahaha. Me being Asian and all, I wa slike. haha..Chopsticks. and the asian with the breast, reminded me of moi. xD .. i love it.
His dad makes me mad. T_T
Lovelovelove. moremoremo.xD
14Night PlayOmg! lovelovelove.
I love Seaton. ~ hahaha. and you know, this is my favorite line:
–which is just a bit difficult on these oversized chopsticks –
hahaha. Me being Asian and all, I wa slike. haha..Chopsticks. and the asian with the breast, reminded me of moi. xD .. i love it.
His dad makes me mad. T_T
Lovelovelove. moremoremo.xD
4/25/2007 c5 Amilie
Ok I want to find out more about Seaton! Tall dark handsome and a mystery...yum...
Good story I like the lead characters, can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work!
Ok I want to find out more about Seaton! Tall dark handsome and a mystery...yum...
Good story I like the lead characters, can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work!
4/25/2007 c5 7Love Eternally
suki and linda are adorable together. and i like seaton. he's cool. all protective in the "i dont want you to know i actually care" kind of way. kinda like yuki and shuichi. from gravi. its awesome. hopefully jayden and him hook up even though he's so much older. can't wait for more. update soon.
7Love Eternallysuki and linda are adorable together. and i like seaton. he's cool. all protective in the "i dont want you to know i actually care" kind of way. kinda like yuki and shuichi. from gravi. its awesome. hopefully jayden and him hook up even though he's so much older. can't wait for more. update soon.
4/25/2007 c5 4Amindaya
Aw, Seaton isn't really a bastard after all. I like the lesbians; poor Jayden needs some nice freinds.
4AmindayaAw, Seaton isn't really a bastard after all. I like the lesbians; poor Jayden needs some nice freinds.
4/25/2007 c5 3Lucas D
I will hand you chocolate flavored reviews (or do you prefer vanilla?) if that's all it takes to keep you glued to your chair, typing your life away.
And those girls make me shudder (not the good kind). Next time, whenever someone asks me why I am usually so opposed to females, I will quote some parts from your story. I can't say i like them. So far. I beg you to change my mind somehow.
Seaton eh? Original and it does suit him. I see that people take the chance to throw guesses here adn there as the plot thickens, but I'd rather not assume or predict anything, and just let you surprise me over and over again.
With all that praise you must be a tad light-headed, so i'll insert a tiny complaint: the chapter was short. Yes, I wished to read more of the goodness, but you just stopped there. I'm not sure if I love you for keeping us hanging or I despise you for playing with us this way. A mix of both sounds like a good idea :)
Cheers, and luck with the story.
3Lucas DI will hand you chocolate flavored reviews (or do you prefer vanilla?) if that's all it takes to keep you glued to your chair, typing your life away.
And those girls make me shudder (not the good kind). Next time, whenever someone asks me why I am usually so opposed to females, I will quote some parts from your story. I can't say i like them. So far. I beg you to change my mind somehow.
Seaton eh? Original and it does suit him. I see that people take the chance to throw guesses here adn there as the plot thickens, but I'd rather not assume or predict anything, and just let you surprise me over and over again.
With all that praise you must be a tad light-headed, so i'll insert a tiny complaint: the chapter was short. Yes, I wished to read more of the goodness, but you just stopped there. I'm not sure if I love you for keeping us hanging or I despise you for playing with us this way. A mix of both sounds like a good idea :)
Cheers, and luck with the story.
4/25/2007 c5 thenorthface
Just so I can put the story in perspective, how old is Seaton?
Thanks! I love this story though! Its sort of got the damsel in distress appeal but with delightful slash!
Just so I can put the story in perspective, how old is Seaton?
Thanks! I love this story though! Its sort of got the damsel in distress appeal but with delightful slash!
4/25/2007 c5 magalina
lol! Long reviews are the best, aren`t they? XD I`ll try to make this one a long one too.
Love the name Seaton, for starters. So much better than Mr. Andrews... Though I knew his name from the summary :) And I loved that he`s driving him to school and stuff. He`s definetly mysterious.
And that part, when he questions his father ("Like he’d yell at me for something that trivial. Although a pizza box isn’t that – no. Stop it." XO I hate that he`s so... so... I don`t know! So like that! Though I love it for the story, I want him to actually stomp and walk away angry! XD Not that that`s gonna happen any time soon, huh? I`d be great...
XD I liked Suki! And Linda`s back! Yay! He`s got friends...! Kind of...
He likes Seaton :D
Long enough? :P Update soon!
lol! Long reviews are the best, aren`t they? XD I`ll try to make this one a long one too.
Love the name Seaton, for starters. So much better than Mr. Andrews... Though I knew his name from the summary :) And I loved that he`s driving him to school and stuff. He`s definetly mysterious.
And that part, when he questions his father ("Like he’d yell at me for something that trivial. Although a pizza box isn’t that – no. Stop it." XO I hate that he`s so... so... I don`t know! So like that! Though I love it for the story, I want him to actually stomp and walk away angry! XD Not that that`s gonna happen any time soon, huh? I`d be great...
XD I liked Suki! And Linda`s back! Yay! He`s got friends...! Kind of...
He likes Seaton :D
Long enough? :P Update soon!
4/24/2007 c4 And-on-Anonymous
It's good. I'm looking forward to finding out what the deeper meaning to the title is :) and, obviously, too the next chapter!
It's good. I'm looking forward to finding out what the deeper meaning to the title is :) and, obviously, too the next chapter!