for Breaking The Mirror4/11/2015 c18 Pixie Pixel
I KNEW IT SEATON IS THE LIEUTENANT OR WHATEVER BLACK I KNEW IT YES AHAHAHAHAHGA this is the greatest feeling ever okay bye AND YOUR STORY IS AMAZING like, it's so well done, and I don't know whether to be sad about that or not. You're getting the emotion and scenes and mannerisms perfectly, and I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not... Sorry, this is coming from a stranger and even if what happens in this story is based on real experiences, I don't expect you to tell me, but I just wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer, and I really respect that.
I KNEW IT SEATON IS THE LIEUTENANT OR WHATEVER BLACK I KNEW IT YES AHAHAHAHAHGA this is the greatest feeling ever okay bye AND YOUR STORY IS AMAZING like, it's so well done, and I don't know whether to be sad about that or not. You're getting the emotion and scenes and mannerisms perfectly, and I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not... Sorry, this is coming from a stranger and even if what happens in this story is based on real experiences, I don't expect you to tell me, but I just wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer, and I really respect that.
2/24/2015 c19 Guest
I like this story, but sometimes things aren't... convincing? I dunno I'm justing speaking from personal experiences but it is intertaining. The Jacobs guy doesn't make a very convincing cop and that kss was a little unsavory, like too soon. I don't know, but it's still a good story regardless!
I like this story, but sometimes things aren't... convincing? I dunno I'm justing speaking from personal experiences but it is intertaining. The Jacobs guy doesn't make a very convincing cop and that kss was a little unsavory, like too soon. I don't know, but it's still a good story regardless!
1/11/2015 c1 
2Ruby Leveau
Oh MY Gosh! Your Story was...I can't find the right words to describe how great it was. It is a Masterpiece! I really enoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this emotional ,beautiful and amazing story ( yes I finally found the right words). It is definitely one of my favorite fiction on Fictionpress.
2Ruby LeveauOh MY Gosh! Your Story was...I can't find the right words to describe how great it was. It is a Masterpiece! I really enoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this emotional ,beautiful and amazing story ( yes I finally found the right words). It is definitely one of my favorite fiction on Fictionpress.
11/13/2014 c10 Guest
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11/13/2014 c11 romeo and juliet
romeo and juliette is better
romeo and juliette is better
10/30/2014 c1 thegreatestperhaps
I just discovered this story and so far I really love it. Jayden is an easy character to root for.
I just discovered this story and so far I really love it. Jayden is an easy character to root for.
10/25/2014 c24 Nimbo
Looks I couldnt finish this fanfic this night
Well shit
Because I couldnt sleep thinking on what would happen
Good think is saturday... or sunday? its 3 AM so its sunday but I wanted this saturday/sunday to get a good sleep because school is killing me and then I found this and got caught and
I hate you
BUT I LOVE YOU
Thanks for writing this I had fun even if im not finished yet
Looks I couldnt finish this fanfic this night
Well shit
Because I couldnt sleep thinking on what would happen
Good think is saturday... or sunday? its 3 AM so its sunday but I wanted this saturday/sunday to get a good sleep because school is killing me and then I found this and got caught and
I hate you
BUT I LOVE YOU
Thanks for writing this I had fun even if im not finished yet
10/25/2014 c23 Nimbo
3 AM
Im still reading this
I cant stop
Too interesting
Im gonna die
3 AM
Im still reading this
I cant stop
Too interesting
Im gonna die
10/25/2014 c32 1Minadalrive
Dear Nilah,
I intended to go to bed early yesterday but ended up sleeping at 4 a.m. instead, reading this story in one sweet swipe :) I enjoyed it very much, but then I'm a sucker for DS power dynamics, especially in slash, and Jayden and Seaton were exactly that. I loved how you put all the nice characters together (the two lesbians, Jayden and Seaton, the teacher with a father complex, the policeman that arrested Jayden...) and how the story took unexpected turns -like when Seaton 'allowed' Jayden to go with the plan to arrest the bad guys. All in all, I really loved this story, and even though I would have liked to see THE scene after chapter 31 happens, I understand that you could see the end at that point. I can just hope you will write another long story someday. Keep up the good work,
Kisses,
Wonderbecky
1MinadalriveDear Nilah,
I intended to go to bed early yesterday but ended up sleeping at 4 a.m. instead, reading this story in one sweet swipe :) I enjoyed it very much, but then I'm a sucker for DS power dynamics, especially in slash, and Jayden and Seaton were exactly that. I loved how you put all the nice characters together (the two lesbians, Jayden and Seaton, the teacher with a father complex, the policeman that arrested Jayden...) and how the story took unexpected turns -like when Seaton 'allowed' Jayden to go with the plan to arrest the bad guys. All in all, I really loved this story, and even though I would have liked to see THE scene after chapter 31 happens, I understand that you could see the end at that point. I can just hope you will write another long story someday. Keep up the good work,
Kisses,
Wonderbecky
10/19/2014 c25 jAN
just twice? I hope it's twice a day, then.
just twice? I hope it's twice a day, then.