for Forgive And Forget4/22/2007 c1 
33WyrdWolf
Normally I'm not a fan of (semi)dark poetry, but yours I enjoy. You have a good sense of rhyme that really flows and merges well with your words. I especially like the line,
'As if this falling rubble is a solid foundation'
Wolfie
33WyrdWolfNormally I'm not a fan of (semi)dark poetry, but yours I enjoy. You have a good sense of rhyme that really flows and merges well with your words. I especially like the line,
'As if this falling rubble is a solid foundation'
Wolfie
4/21/2007 c1 Atlantic-Tree-Rat
The end of this was like... like.. like... I dunno, sort of like confusing and at the EXACT same time it was all like... What's that word you use when something leaves you thinking about the thing? Argh, cnt 'memba, but u Kn0 wt I mean so yeh.
KeEp WrItInG!
xoxoxo
Tess
The end of this was like... like.. like... I dunno, sort of like confusing and at the EXACT same time it was all like... What's that word you use when something leaves you thinking about the thing? Argh, cnt 'memba, but u Kn0 wt I mean so yeh.
KeEp WrItInG!
xoxoxo
Tess