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8/28/2007 c1 38Kenna-Kat11
interesting

complex yet simple

i like it

~E~
5/23/2007 c1 9peteygirl
i really liked this. the first thing that i noticed obviously was the cool shape of the lines. but then i read the words and i was like, that is a really cool poem. so i like it! and i'm adding you to my favorite author list!
5/13/2007 c1 50Zeurpiet
I like this... very different, but in a good way. Good job!
4/25/2007 c1 65Nemonus
Ooh. That really affects me personally, because I shut myself away from people. The cellophane analogy is very apt and a little scary, so that it gets the point across well. Good observations. "Did I save myself? Yes." can be interpreted in different ways, and I'd kinda like to know what exactly you mean by that. Cellophane saves you from the fear of people, it keeps your "self" intact, but it kills your relationships, which are true humanity...that's what I got from it. Good job.
4/21/2007 c1 2brightlywound93
Great job! Another great poem!

Kali
4/20/2007 c1 10tearsofthefallen
Cool format. That was a really good poem..sad and happyish. Good job!

Could you please read some of mine? I think that you might like them.

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