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11/19/2008 c1 Isca
"A billion rising suns." Absolutely BRILLIANT imagery! :D
6/24/2007 c1 54kaylajac
you just personified cosmic bodies, and oh my god, you did it so well :D
4/23/2007 c1 26Dragonslostchild
sorry I didn't get to check this out yesterday like I said I would. School stuff took longer than expected.

As usual, you've created a brilliant haiku. The personification of the stars gives both them and the night a feeling of power you don't usually get from them. While a lot of people describe stars as candle-light or fireflies or... who knows what, it's actually interesting and refreshing to have someone write them as what they are: suns.

DLC
4/21/2007 c1 322Basara
vast detailed work...

nice!
4/20/2007 c1 70continuous brevity
i love this, it has such beautiful imagery. nice work.
4/20/2007 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Beautiful detail. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

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