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7/16/2007 c1 239poetrypal
i like this overall. the alliteration gives it a calm touch and the overall tone is airy and natural.. nice.
6/24/2007 c1 54kaylajac
wow, i like this. that's a big metaphor to pack into such a small space. very nice.
4/24/2007 c1 322Basara
how the mature ones leave and live in the world...

nice...
4/23/2007 c1 26Dragonslostchild
I loved this so much. Beautiful metaphors- both of the home and family being a fortress and being a tree. I think this is one of my favorites.

DLC
4/21/2007 c1 81Princess-anna57
Fascinating - this haiku really makes you think! Awesome. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

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