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1/20/2008 c1 3Raethnu
Pirate poems, huh? It's a fun idea.

Anyway, I like the flow of your poems. They are well-worded and have a good rhythm, along with rhyming (which, while a lot of people say poetry doesn't have to rhyme, I find it hard to read if it doesn't - personal preference, I suppose). The fourth line "Our insight of the language was spoken by thee" intrigues me. While I sort of see what you are trying to say, I feel like I am missing something. If that wasn't your intent, perhaps the line could be reworded to clarify the meaning? Just my two cents.
6/5/2007 c1 1AluminumMuse
Very pretty. Yo ho yo ho. The last lines seem to have a different flow to them than the first, however. -shrugs- Maybe I am just crazy.

-Feather La
5/14/2007 c1 wyckydgoddess
Yo Ho A Pirates Life For Me!
5/7/2007 c1 Ajna
What lovely rhyming! I enjoyed reading this, it was truly a treat!
4/26/2007 c1 32fharfalla
I kind of smiled at your new pen name, three accounts huh? wow.. anyway, ur rather good at these kind of poems.. very Nice! :P

*rippedwings*
4/23/2007 c1 28surrealphobia
You change your name(s) yet again! I'm having a fun time keeping up with reviewing all three of your accounts. ^^ I really enjoyed this poem. Though I doubt any pirate would be literate enough to say what you did (Imagine Jack!) it still flowed. I like the references to the sea: Knowing ancient wisdom was bestowed upon the sea

It rhymes so well I want to sing it.

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